四六級作文模式:善用長短句和插入語
四六級難度不是很大，但是得分率卻非常的低，很多考生在備考四六級的時候，都會掌握一定的作文模板和基本的語法、詞彙、句型用法之後，如果能夠在作文中創造一些詞彙或者是文章的閃光點，就一定讓文章變的多彩。
高分作文標誌:
1：是否長短句交叉;2、是否會使用插入語;3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，儘量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞; 4、關鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重複詞; 5、句型使用是否準確、地道。
下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：
1. 適當用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個經典結尾2004年六月六級作文的最後一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善於使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞後，兩邊分別加上逗號。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞後，兩邊分別加上逗號。
比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要學會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)
下面舉一篇南京工程學院某位同學寫的優秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I ( By Simmy )
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換 very
thrilling 替換 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替換 search
an army of 替換 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發生了什麼事情; Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular。
以上就是爲大家整理的四六級作文模式:善用長短句和插入語，作文的寫作要求是非常高的，很多人都覺得作文的難度不大，忽略了備考，在考試的時候又因爲時間緊張，寫出來的作品就不言而喻，希望本篇文章的介紹可以幫助到大家。
