高級商務英語BEC2011寫作部分綜合指導
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高級商務英語BEC2011寫作部分綜合指導(1)
7. 說明原因：
This is owing to …
due to …
a result of …
because of …
注：owing to 通常用於不好的消息。如果想在原因中使用動詞，請加上the fact that的從句。
環境：
You have seen an advertisement in the newspaper for a post as office manger. You want an application form.
I would appreciate it if you could send me an application form.
The photocopier in your office has broken down. You want to have it repaired, quickly.
We would be grateful if you could send a repairman to fix our photocopier as soon as possible.
You have moved your office and you want the post office to forward your letters to your new address.
Please could you forward my letters to my new address.
You want the telephone company to put another telephone in your office. You need it urgently.
We would appreciate it if you could put another telephone in our office immediately.
You have written to a company and you want them to reply quickly.
I would be grateful if you could give us a reply quickly.
8. 請求採取行動：
Please could you … as soon as possible.
We would be grateful if you could … without delay.
We would be appreciate it if you could … immediately.
注：please could you … 是最直接的方式。在要求一些一般性的事情時，可以使用這種表達
9. 抱歉：
We must apologize for …
We apologize for …
We are extremely sorry for …
注：以上句型後請使用動詞ing形式。
以上句型中的for可以換成that，然後用從句表達。
一般來說，解釋產生問題的原因，然後在信的結尾處再次表達歉意。
再次抱歉：
Please accept our apologies once again.
We hope that this has not caused you any inconvenience.
With apologies once again.
10. 要求提供信息：
Please could you
We would be grateful if you could
We would appreciate it if you could
give us further details about ..
inform us (about/if) …
let us know ( about/if ) …
We would like to know ( about/if ) …
注：如果需要特別重要的信息，可以在以上句型前使用：in particular。
環境：
You wrote a letter to someone and they haven’t replied. You want to know if they received the letter.
We would be grateful if you could let us know if the letter has reached you.
A businessman is going to your country. He wants you to get a visa for him. You need all the details about his passport (his nationality, date of birth, where his passport was issued, and when it expires).
Please could you give details about your passport. I would like to know your nationality, date of birth, where your passport was issued and when it expires.
You want to know about the same businessman’s flight (flight number, date and time of arrival).
In particular, I would like to know your flight number, date and time of arrival.
increase prices --- fall of the dollar
We have been force to increase our prices. This is owing to the fall of the dollar.
Delay the delivery of the goods --- strike by airline pilots
We have been forced to delay the delivery of the goods. This is owing to the strike by airline pilots.
Increase all salaries by 10% --- rise in sales
We are able to increase all salaries by 10%. This is the result of a big rise in sales.
Cut all salaries by 10% --- fall in sales
We have been forced to cut all salaries by 10%. This is due to the fact that there has been a fall in sales in the past ten months.
Cannot deliver your new order --- we have not received your payment fro the last order
We regret that we are unable to deliver your new order immediately. This is owing to the fact that we have not received your payment for the last order.
Cancel the meeting --- a lot of staff have been ill
We have been forced to cancel the meeting. This is because some members of our staff have been ill.
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11. 輕度抱怨：
Unfortunately, + 表示 something is wrong 的句子
環境：
A company has sent you a bill for the wrong goods.
Unfortunately you sent us a bill for the wrong goods. Please could you send us a correct bill as soon as possible.
Your new photocopier has broken down. You have to write to the company who sold it to you.
Unfortunately our new photocopier has broken down. Please could you send a repairman to fix it for us as soon as possible.
Two temporary secretaries do not speak English. You have to write to the agency who sent them to you.
Unfortunately two temporary secretaries you recommended to us do not speak English. We would be grateful if you could recommend two more who could speak English.
You keep receiving letters for someone else. You have to write to the post office.
Unfortunately I keep receiving letters for someone else. Please could you make the address clear before you deliver letters every day.
12. 提醒某人對某事的注意：
I should like to draw your attention to (the fact that)…
I should like to point out that …
如果你提醒的事情對方已經知道(你想表達你的生氣)：
I should like to remind you that…
I hope that it is not necessary to remind you that …
環境：
One of your staff keeps parking his car in front of the main door, the space which is reserved for the MD.
I should like to remind you that the space in front of the main door is reserved for the MD.
Someone is interested in purchasing a large quantity of your simplex cameras. Tell him about 25% discount for large orders.
I should like t draw your attention to the fact that we offer about 25% discount for larger orders.
One of your staff arrives half an hour late for work every day. (She should start at 9.30.)
I hope that it is not necessary to remind you that work start at 9: 30 every day.
Someone is interested in your products. Tell him that you guarantee that your prices are the largest in the country.
I should like to point out that we guarantee that all prices are the lowest in the country.
13. 要求某人採取行動：
We must insist that …DO… (DO指動詞原型)
注：請注意這一句型和句型8的區別。
環境：
We must insist that you deliver the goods immediately.
14. 警告：
Unless…
If…(not)…
We will be forced to …
環境：(What warnings would you give these people?)
A company that has not paid your bill
Unless you pay the bill, we will be forced to take legal actions.
Another company that is using your company’s car park
If you do not move your car away from our park, we will be forced to turn to the police.
An employee who always arrives late for work
Unless you come to work on time, we will be forced to fire you.
A builder who has left a lot of their tools in your office
If you do not take your tools from our office, we will be forced to throw them away.
15. 強烈抱怨：
注：
強烈抱怨遵循以下步驟：
a. 闡述發生的問題：it is now over nine months since we placed this order and we are still waiting for the cabinets.
b. 使用句型12：I should like to point out that we have already paid for these cabinets.
c. 使用句型 13：we must insist that you deliver them immediately.
d. 使用句型14：unless we hear from you within 7 days we will take legal action.
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第三章 寫作後的檢查(包括圖表寫作)
檢查的四個主要方面：
1.標點符號：
完全禁用的符號：
：“” 《》。
2.拼寫：
雙寫輔音
y改成複數
3.語法：
主謂一致
冠詞
次序
介詞
時態
漏詞
4.可能導致信息表達不清的因素：
太長的段落
太長的句子
運用不常使用的詞彙
一次包含太多的信息
信息不完整
信息順序混亂
圖表作文
對於線性圖表的描述
上升
1. 對於上升趨勢的描述：
a. 可以使用的動詞或動詞詞組：
to increase
to go up
to rise
to grow
to jump
to leap
to soar
to shoot
to pick up
b. 可以使用的名詞：
an increase
a growth
a jump
a soar
an upward trend
2. 對於上升到某個位置的描述：
a. 1. a. 中的動詞+to+具體數據。
b. 1. a. 中的動詞+to+the peak of+具體數據。
c. 1. a. 中的動詞+reaching the peak of +具體數據。
d. 1. a. 中的動詞+reaching + 具體數據。
e. to peak at + 具體數據
f. to climb to + 具體數據
3. 對於上升的程度的描述：
a. 1. a. 中的動詞+by + 具體數據。
b. 1. a. 中的動詞+副詞。
對於平穩的趨勢的描述，可以使用的動詞或動詞詞組：
to hardly change
to have little change
to keep steady
to level off
to remain constant
to stay the same
表示程度的副詞：
1. 程度較大：
considerably
dramatically
greatly
markedly
obviously
quickly
rapidly
sharply
significantly
suddenly
2. 程度較小：
slightly
gradually
slowly
steadily
時間的嵌入
嵌入時間時所使用的介詞和介詞詞組：
in
from……to……
between…………
during……and……
at the start of ……
by the end of ……
over ……
at the end of ……
throughout ……
時間’s + 具體數據
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上升和下降趨勢的組合描述(嵌入了時間和程度之後)：
1. 先上升後下降的句型：
...... increased slowly during…… and …… but fell sharply in …….
A steady fall in …… during …… and …… followed the sharp increase in …….
2. 先下降後上升的句型：
…… fell before …… began to make a recovery ……
…… continue the recovery, climbing to ……
…… dropped during …… but increased again in ……
…… fell and then pick up during ……
…… collapsed before rising to ……at the end of ……
3. 起伏波動的句型：
…… fluctuated sharply all through ……
4. 波動不大的句型：
…… hardly changed through the period between ……and ……
柱狀圖形的描述
轉換爲線形圖形的描述
餅狀圖形的描述
對於百分比進行描述所使用的句型：
…… % the …… is/has/have/are ……
…… accounts for ……% of the total
…… takes up ……% in the whole chart
趨勢的比較
1. 表示相似的句型 (實例) ：
Both share prices rose sharply in January.
Neither company has made a profit yet.
Like X, Y fell in June.
X rose just as sharply as Y.
2. 表示差異的句型(實例)：
X fell sharply whereas/while Y remained steady.
X fell quickly compared to Y.
Unlike Y, X rose by 10%.
X rose far more dramatically than Y.
3. 表示倍數的句型：
the …… doubled/tripled in …… compared with those in ……
4. 客觀比較的句型：
…… is …… in contrast to ……
