雅思寫作全寫簡單句會得幾分
雅思寫作全寫簡單句會得幾分?爲了幫助大家備考雅思寫作，下面小編就給大家解答一下這個問題。希望大家喜歡!
雅思寫作全寫簡單句會得幾分
1.沒有時態語法錯誤
2.沒有跑題
3.題目中涉及到的都討論過
如果達到這種程度，就是5.5分到6分的水平了。
八類雅思寫作常用簡單句整理
由於分析角度不同，不同語法書對英語句子的劃分也相應有不同的分類。在此筆者主要根據雅思寫作的需要，從句子結構的角度講解集中類型的句子。按結構劃分，句子可以分爲簡單句(simple)，並列句(compound)，複合句(complex)，和並列複合句(compound-cmplex)等。
簡單句
一個獨立的句子，如果只有一個主語(可以是並列主語)和一個謂語(可以是並列謂語)，這樣的句子就稱爲簡單句。簡單句只能有一個主語和謂語，但是可以包含不止一個賓語、定語或狀語。
1 We should ( ).
我們應該(弘揚民族文化)。
2 Few people can ( ).
很少人能(抵擋住毒品的誘惑)。
3 The advertisement is ( ).
該廣告(誤導人和誇大其辭)。
4 The direct cause of drug-taking is ( ).
吸毒的直接原因是(無知和好奇)。
5 The ( ) the repaidly expanding population and economic development.
(反對方把環境的惡化歸咎於)人口的迅速增長和經濟的快速發展。
6 The number of TV audience ( ) of 20,000 at 9 pm.
電視觀衆的人數在9點(達到最高點)，爲2萬人。
7 Animal testing ( ).
動物實驗(侵犯了動物的生存權利)。
8 Traveling abroad ( ).
出國旅遊(開闊視野、豐富知識和培養獨立性)。
Key:
1 carry forward our national culture
2 resist the temptation of drugs
3 misguiding and exaggerative
4 ignorance and curiosity
5 opponents attribute the deterioration of environment to
6 reaches a peak
7 violates animals’ right of subsistence
8 broadens one’s vision, enriches one’s mind and cultivates independence
雅思寫作句法總結—簡單句可以不簡單
雅思寫作評分標準要求文章表達句法結構多樣化，因此我們除了使用並列句複合句之外，免不了會使用一些簡單句，事實上簡單也是可被大膽使用的，前提是咋們也使它變漂亮，那麼接下來就給烤鴨們介紹以下拓展簡單句常見的四種方法。
一，使用介詞擴展句子
因果關係：As a result of, due to, because of
對比關係：Like, unlike, instead of
轉折關係：Despite, in spite of
遞進關係：Besides, in addition to
表伴隨：With, without
表 方 式 By 表地點：In
表時間：Before, after
表目的：For
表方面：In, in terms of
很多職業運動員過着非常奢侈的生活。(劍 6-2)
Many sports professionals live extravagant lifestyle.
Many sports professionals live extravagant lifestyle with huge houses and cars.
Just like movie stars, many sports professionals live extravagant lifestyle with huge houses and cars.
手機似乎成了學生生活中不可缺少的一部分。
The mobile phone seems to have become an indispensable part of students’
lives, both in school and at home.
二，動詞不定式表目的
爲了解決堵車問題，政府應該改善公共交通。(劍 8-3 )
To solve the problem of traffic congestion, the government should improve
public transport in cities.
爲了減少青少年犯罪，學校應該更加重視學生的行爲問題。
To reduce youth crimes, schools should pay more attention to students’
behavior.
三，動名詞作主語
我們需要推廣電動汽車，那麼城市空氣質量就能得到改善。(劍 8-3)
We should promote electric cars and then air quality in cities could be
improved.
Promoting electric cars can effectively improve air quality in cities. Persuading people to buy electric cars would be an effective strategy for improving air quality in cities.
四，形式主語和形式賓語
剛畢業的人可能會難以適應工作環境。
It is difficult for new graduates to adapt to the environment of
workplaces.
The lack of experience would make it difficult for new graduates to adapt to the environment of workplaces.
雅思作文點評:解決環境問題方法是漲價?
The best way to solve environmental problems is to raise the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As we see, smog is choking our cities and toxic chemicals are contaminating our drinking water, lowering the quality of people's living conditions. Naturally, the question is in the spotlight whether it is effective to cope with environmental problems by raising the price of fuel (這個句子寫得比較特殊,因爲是講前面的 the question 和後面的同位語從句 whether it is effective… 隔開了,"兇手"是謂語部分 is in the spotlight .俗稱,分割式同位語從句) . And my sense is that it is a good way, but never the best. (59words)
點評:看了第一段的語言,感覺作者英語水平應該很高,不管是從語言上也好,還是從表達的內容也好,都很老練.其次,值得一提的是,再怎麼優秀的文章,結構基本還是一樣的.此段也是先引入話題,然後表達自己的觀點.所以,對於那些一天到晚總在研究作文結構的同學來說,你們可以休息一下了,把精力放到語言上來吧.文章的結構,特別是首尾段的太容易了,沒什麼多研究的。
It is true that manufacturers, whose aim is to make more profits, have to limit the amount of fuel used in production by some way (多麼不好的表達!本來句子寫得挺好的,結果來了句 by some way ,可以理解爲通過某種方式,這樣的話,應該不能算是錯誤的,但是從另外個角度,總覺得這個表達放在這個句子裏有點"雞立鶴羣"的感覺,由於作者水平很高,所以能不能想想辦法,精益求精呢?!) , due to the increase of fuel price, to cut down on their cost of products, reducing the emission in the process of manufacture (作者整句的意思是想說:"生產商的目的是獲得更高的利潤,所以必須通過某種方式限制生產過程所用的燃料,因爲燃料價格上升了,這樣做可以降低產品的成本,減少生產過程中氣體排放."在我翻成中文以後,我們再來看這個句子,最後的 reducing the emission ...應該是可以理解了,它是 limit the amount of fuel used in production 的結果狀語,而 to cut down on their cost of products 呢?!是目的.總結一下,這個句子完全可以當作我們翻譯課上的例句,因爲對翻譯來說,老師最喜歡這樣的句子,考驗學生對句子結構的分析,此作者能寫作這樣的句子,水平看來和我有的一拼(小小自戀一下,呵呵...)但是,雅思考試的時候,考官是否能看懂呢?!我想考官是能夠看懂的,但問題是考官會不會花心思去看?!這個是因考官而異,所以我主張,句子寫得複雜沒有問題,但是結構一定要清晰,不能複雜到連考官都琢磨半天,那就不好了!!!這句話,我乍看之下,能夠理解,那麼推定考官也能理解,所以還是不錯的) . (超級長句,很不錯) Also, faced with sharply growing price of common fuels, producers may turn to new types of energy resources that are economical as well as harmless to environment (還是前面加個 the 吧, environment 是可數名詞) , in long term (前面逗號可以不要,然後改成 in the long term .看來作者對冠詞的把握不好) 。
點評:此段充分顯示了作者的語言功底,太神奇了!但是,大家有沒有發現,人人看了此段都會覺得好,但是此段有沒有比較難的單詞呢?!答案是沒有!說明什麼呢?!好的作文也不需要刻意追求詞彙的難度,而是詞彙的廣度!
But, as usual, only when the government or authoritative organizations enforce environmental regulations on producers will the latter scenario happen.( 倒裝句開頭,不錯.另外,大家可以學個單詞 ,scenario ,它在此表示"可能發生的情況"比如: The death of democracy becomes quite a likely scenario.) In other words, the authorities play an active role in preventing the excessive pollutants from pouring out into rivers or air. Without the compulsory clauses, manufacturers may choose low-cost fuel, rather than the one inoffensive to the surroundings, for, in the short term, manufacturers, especially small ones, can not afford the high expense on( 是 of 吧 ) advanced equipment that can make the most of resources, and thus, lessen the pollutants. (又是個厲害的長句,但是對冠詞的把握仍然是瑕疵)
點評:語言功底好的人有什麼特點?!從句嗎?不是.而是非謂語動詞和從句的結合。
Furthermore, on the whole, the high fuel price of energy resources can not eliminate the pollution, because there, whether more or less, has still been pollution ( whether more or less 雖然是插入語,但是感覺這句這樣寫有點不自然,而且後面是用完成時似乎也不對.試改爲: there is still more or less pollution. ) . And, the radical approach to the environmental problems lies with the environmental awareness of producers. With the broad awareness about the importance of sustainable development, producers are willing to develop renewable energy resources, instead of being compelled to carry out the environmental policy established by the government, which is more effective but more difficult to reach. ( 長句,大家欣賞一下吧 )
So, the environmental problems can be solved by the rise in price of fuel partially, but not radically. And then, better to take advantage to all the price mechanism, administration and the public's knowledge, than to make use of only one of them. ( 348words )
點評:最後一段是敗筆,或者說明顯寫的沒前面幾段好!
試改爲: Therefore, raising fuel price can, to some extent, tackle the environmental problems but is far from thoroughly and the combination of price mechanism, administration and public knowledge is much better than make use of merely one of them.
總評:我想也不用多說了,8分。
