描寫人物的大學英語作文
大學見過的人多了，在很多人的地方說英語的話大家應該不會結巴了吧。下面是本站小編給大家整理的描寫人物的大學英語作文，供大家參閱!
A Person I Admire——Franklin Roosevelt
Times need heroes, and heroes stand out. Franklin Roose velt is just a hero of the times. Well known for his unprecedented 13 years as the President of U. S. , he is regarded as a savior of America. However, it is not his brilliant achievements that attract me. What I really admire are some qualities shining in his whole life such as fortitude, courage and also his amiability.
His early time, I mean before his forties, was smooth. He was born rich and had a happy marriage. After graduating from Harvard, he served in the Navy. At that time, he had already shown his remarkable leadership and since his uncle was a President, he would surely enter the political arena. But everything changed when he was 39. Healthy and strong as he was, he was attacked by polio after swimming, which caused the life long de formity in his legs. It was extremely hard for this ambitious man to face the misfortune. He was, of course, in a bad mood and wanted to give up all his dreams at first. Then, after careful thinking, he finally decided to bestir himself. He was not a man
easy to surrender. Again he took part in political activities and,at the same time, practiced standing up and then walking with a stick. Eventually this brave man won the battle against fate. He became the only disabled President in American history and unprecedentedly served four terms. All should be attributed to his fortitude.
"The only thing we fear is fear itself." This famous saying now has spread all over the world and encouraged lots of evelt first said it, and as a great leader, he made all his people believe it. He practiced what he preached for he was surely a courageous person challenging the tradition. He formulated new policies to help his nation out of the Depression. He declared war against Fascists though most of the Congressmen opposed him at that time. All proved that he was right for his courage was not rash but based on careful thinking. "A leader is one who dares to dream, and then, dares to achieve."
He was great, but not great in appearance. He looked like a kind grandpa at the first sight. He initiated the fireside chat to express his ideas and explain his policies in a relaxed atmosphere on radio. He always smiled sincerely when speaking and listening. These didn't lower his prestige but made him amiable and welcome.
He is surely not a perfect man no one can be y age has its hero in the forefront, just like Franklin Roosevelt a man I admire.
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本文記敘了作者心目中崇拜的人——美國前總統羅斯福。文章主要圍繞他的毅力，勇氣和和藹可親三種品質來展開。首先，作者以平實流暢的語言表現了他得了小兒麻痹症後如何戰勝自我，重拾信心，身殘志堅，並史無前例地四次當選美國總統的頑強毅力。其次，作者描述了羅斯福總統帶領美國人民向傳統挑戰，度過經濟大蕭條時期，並不顧多數國會議員的反對向法西斯宣戰的巨大勇氣。最後，作者又表現了羅斯福總統和藹可親的一面，他真誠的笑容和他以爐邊談話的形式通過電波與美國人民在輕鬆的氣氛中進行交流。
本文還引用了羅斯福總統的名言，如“The only thing we fear is fear itself.”’“A leader is one who dares tO dream，and then，dares toachieve.”等，增加了文章的說服力。
但文章仍需在以下幾個方面有所改進：一、段落之間缺少承上啓下的自然銜接(transition)，意義的轉折顯得生硬，比較突然。恰當地運用銜接手段可以將幾個段落有機地結合成一個整體。二、段首最好能有依據概括大意，點明中心的主題句(topic sentence)，使讀者對每一段的內容一目瞭然。三、第二段對羅斯福生平的介紹稍稍過長，破壞了文章整體的結構平衡，不妨將一些與主題無關的句子刪去，效果會更好。
(點評教師：黃鶯)
描寫人物的大學英語作文：Helen KellerHow would I gather up the courage to keep on living if I were doomed to spend my life in the completely soundless darkness? Helen Keller, a distinguished American author, gave this question a perfect answer by writing her glamorous legend that won her profound respect and great admiration throughout the world. Despite the physical handicaps, she lived her life to the full instead of crying, "Jesus, life is unfair!" Apparently, destiny worked no magic on her. Then where did she derive the strength to overcome the seemingly unconquerable difficulties while the able bodied often feel lost in despair when they are frustrated?
A calamitous disaster deprived Keller of many things we take for granted. She was totally cut off from the visible world and yearned for only three days to see. Though it seemed to be the wildest dream beyond fulfillment, she did see what we, born with sight, fail to see. Her love of life brought her bright eyes and sharp ears to appreciate the grandest beauty of nature and the sweetest whispers of the breeze. She took pleasure in every second. She lived with a heart filled with gratitude willing to digout the hidden truth of life. Entitled to sight and hearing, we usually abuse the faculties rather than cherish them as a precious gift. With that, we've missed the essence of life that lies around us in simple forms.
Keller's striking optimism might be her secret of success,but what made her achieve the impossible is that she lived where as we exist. People hardly recognize the value of something till it's lost. What if we were to lose our sight the next moment?
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海倫.凱勒的故事是大家耳熟能詳的。作者用這篇小巧精緻、內涵深刻的散文，再一次向我們演繹了這位身殘志堅的偉人譜寫的生命之歌，用她飽含深情的筆墨對着我們的靈魂深處發出了真誠的呼聲：珍惜生命，熱愛每一個日日夜夜，做一名生活的強者吧!
作者語言功底雄厚，用詞精練地道，表達恰如其分，宛如行雲流水，最後的點題如畫龍點睛，幾乎無可挑剔：“Keller's striking optimism might be her secret Of success，but what made her achieve the impossible is that she lived whereas weexist.”全文猶如一塊無瑕的美玉，讓人愛不釋手。從文章背後，不知讀者是否能看到作者那顆玲瓏剔透的心?
(點評教師：時麗娜)
描寫人物的大學英語作文：A Singers DeathOctober 18th, 2002, a sad day to most fans, for their idol Luo Wen left them forever. It's really bad news to the HK music circles, as well as to me.
Luo Wen, in my mind, was always strict with himself in his singing career. His early song were all vigorous and inspiring,partly for the special social environment at that time. Later, as the idol singers came up one after another, the old songs were not fit for the young fans, so he tried to change his style. And these years, he began to help some new singers to improve their skills. His songs were so influential that the HK Minister of Finance even used one to encourage all the citizens to work hard to gether and overcome the difficulty bravely.
Unfortunately, about two years ago, the news that he got cancer flew into our ears. However, he still went on singing and teaching. He had been struggling with the disease until the last minute. As the newspapers reported, he didn't close his eyes when he died. Someone said it was because he had a wish unfulfilled. He had hoped to give the last performance in HK in September, but his illness prevented him from doing that. It may be the biggest regret in his life. It's also said that he only weighed 32 kilograms at the end of his life. You can't imagine how much he had suffered from the disease. But every time we saw him in public, he was wearing a smile.
The next day, many newspapers reported his death and simultaneously praised him for his contribution to the HK music circles and his spirit of struggling against the disease. He set a good
example for those young people who don't value their lives.
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在香港歌手羅文因病逝世之際，作者寫了這篇文章，表達了對羅文的深切哀悼。文中，作者綜述了羅文對香港歌壇的貢獻，如在演唱風格上他不斷地變化創新，致力於培養樂壇新人，他對公衆的影響力等，頌揚了他與疾病做鬥爭的頑強精神，最後作者號召大家珍惜生命的價值。字裏行間流露出作者對羅文的喜愛，對他不幸逝世的惋惜和對他人格的敬仰。
文中的一些具體細節和例子使文章生動不少，如香港財政司長用他的歌來鼓舞市民努力工作，克服困難;他因未完成最後的心願而死不瞑目;他在飽受病魔折磨之際仍然面帶微笑地出現在公衆面前等。
但這篇文章在構思上的一大缺陷是由於對羅文的介紹涉及了多個方面，均是一筆帶過，泛泛而談，沒有具體的展開，使文章顯得較爲空洞、缺乏主題和深度。如果能就其中的某一點層層深入展開論述，人物的形象會更加鮮明、飽滿。文章的主題會更爲明確，更爲深刻。
此外，文中還有幾處表達顯得生硬，如第三段中the news that he got cancer flew into our ears不符合英語的表達習慣，可改爲word came that he had cancer。還有his illness prevented him from doing that，最好改爲he was too weak to do that。
(點評教師：黃鶯)
