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Some think most crime is the result of circumstances e.g. poverty and other social problems. Others believe that most crime is committed by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
觀點：
貧窮，沒有辦法生存，犯罪去獲得錢
人天生比較暴力，很難控制自己，犯罪
父母教育不好，小孩被虐待和學習不好的榜樣，長大犯罪
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Are murderers born or made?
Over the course of many years Raine and his team scanned the brains of numerous murderers and nearly all showed similar brain changes. There was reduced activity in the pre-frontal cortex, the area of the brain which controls emotional impulses, and over activation of the amygdala, the area which generates our emotions.
犯罪的人控制情緒的大腦部分活動很低，而產生情緒的大腦部分活動很活躍
So it seems that murderers have brains that make them more prone to rage and anger, while at the same time making them less able to control themselves.
殺人犯很容易生氣，但是很難控制自己
Raine's studies suggest that part of the reason may be childhood abuse, which can create killers by causing physical damage to the brain. The pre-frontal cortex is especially vulnerable
"Early physical abuse, amongst other things could have led to the brain damage, which could have led to him committing this violent act," Raine says.
But only a small proportion of those who have a terrible childhood grow up to become murderers. Could there be factors that predispose us to murder?
Donta Page was physically abused as a child
很多殺人犯童年時被虐待，影響了大腦
About 30% of men have this so-called warrior gene, but whether the gene is triggered or not depends crucially on what happens to you in childhood.
His explanation is that he was protected from a potentially violent legacy by a happy childhood. "If you've the high-risk form of the gene and you were abused early on in life, your chances of a life of crime are much higher. If you have the high-risk gene but you weren't abused, then there really wasn't much risk. So just a gene by itself, the variant doesn't really dramatically affect behaviour, but under certain environmental conditions there is a big difference".
環境決定了是否人的暴力基因會爆發
So it seems that a genetic tendency towards violence, together with an abusive childhood, are literally a killer combination - murderers are both born and made.
We now have a far more sophisticated understanding of the complex interactions between the social and the biological factors that predispose people to violence. But what can we do with that knowledge?
Research is focusing on ways to reduce violent behaviour and there is good evidence that teaching families who are at risk positive parenting skills is effective at improving impulse control.
提高父母的教育方式是一個解決暴力行爲的方式
相關詞夥：
controls emotional impulses 控制衝動情緒
generates our emotions 產生情緒
prone to rage and anger 容易發怒
childhood abuse 童年被家暴
cause physical damage to the brain 傷害大腦
brutally murdered 殘忍殺害
commit a violent act 做出暴力的舉動
predispose us to murder 被謀殺的因素
physically abused 被虐待
be predisposed to violence 容易使用暴力
under certain environmental conditions 在特定環境下
a genetic tendency towards violence 天生有暴力傾向
social factors 社會因素
biological factors 基因的原因
reduce violent behaviour 減少暴力行爲
Over the course of many years 許多年
exploring the minds of 弄明白...的思維
a step back down the evolutionary ladder 進化後退
