商務英語寫作範文：感謝信
在BEC商務英語寫作中，很多人對作文有緊張的情緒，一方面平時的英語考試中作文就不是那麼擅長，另一方面商務英語作文的專業性更強。我們在吸收商務英語知識的時候作文也是讓我們靈活運用，下面就是商務英語寫作感謝信的範文。
You are the president of a local university and your personal assistant has just written a short letter to you. The contracted company has just offered a lecture for your students and they would also offer some opportunities.
Look at the information below, reply the letter.
以下是校長的助理寫給校長的一封反映近期舉行的一個研討會的信件,然後校長根據信件回覆舉辦方以示感謝.
Dear president,
I would like to inform you that one of our contracted company held a successful seminar in our university last Tuesday March 16th in which the CFO delivered a speech on Business Management and responded to various questions raised by our students. In addition , they offered free-charge materials on Business administration and accounting , which would be valuable to enhance the knowledge and ability of our students to handle real-life problems and the questions they would meet in the foreseeable working environment.
According to the terms in the new agreement, they will provide internship and short-term jobs for students majoring in Finance and Business Management , which is due to take place in June every year.
要點分析+思路點拔
確定任務 這是一填寫給簽約合作公司的感謝信,結構爲表達感謝, 讚美對方的幫助,聯絡感情,提出進一步合作的申請,詢問相關事宜.
寫作要點:首句要表明信件爲信類型,使用商務標準用語並表述出對方給予的幫助.第二段詳細表述出對方提供的幫助所帶來的成效.第三.四段分別詢問對方對參加實習學生的要求, 並提出希望接納更多其他專業學生的申請.
寫作詞彙
Concerning 關於
In regard to 關於
With reference to 關於
Programme n.項目
Seminar n.研討會
Session n.研討會
Express v.表達 Extend v.表達
Sincere thanks 衷心感謝 heartfelt appreciation 衷心感謝
Practice v.練習 internship n.實習
Offer v.提供 supply , provide 提供
Leading company行業的領導 sector 行業
Field n.行業 high prestige n.聲譽
Around the world 全球的
Good comments,
Have good comments on ...
Have a high opinion of
Speak well of 好評
Be of great value巨大價值
Short-term jobs 短期工作
The case study案例研究
In addition to 另外
Make us informed of 通知
Well-known著名的
The eligibility of 資格
關鍵句型
I am writing to express our sincere appreciation and gratitude for your...我寫信來特別表達我們對於...真心的感激
I am writing to express our sincere appreciate and gratitude for your seminar in our university last Tuesday March 16th.
I am writing to extend our heartfelt thanks for your我寫信秋表達我對於... 由衷的感謝
I am writing to extend our heartfelt thanks for your help.
We appreciate your doing...感謝您...
We appreciate you offered free-charge material on Business Administration and accouting to our students.
We extremely appreciate 特別感謝...
We extremely appreciate you come here to support our activity.
I am writing with great gratitude for your ...我寫信來特別表達我對於...的感激
I am writing with great gratitude for your understanding for the delay
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your 我從內心深處對您... 表示感謝.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your support.
Thank you will all my heart for your 對於... 我全心全意地表示感謝
Thanks you will all my heart for your investment.
I am writing on behalf of ...to thank you for your...我代表... 寫信表示對於... 的感謝
I am writing on behalf of our president to thank your for your invitation.
表示... 促成了良好的成效
Contribute to ...促成了, 有助於
If your methods can not contributed to your greater emotional and physical healthy, it’s time to find a healthier ones.
Lead to ,構成了,造成了...
You know , late completion lead to civil litigation .
Help shape 幫助塑造...
The school help shaped their intelligence and diligence.
Help foster 幫助培養
One way to help foster improve communication skills is to ask question properly
Help make ... More productive 幫助使得... 更高效
This training will make worker to produce more productive.
Help promote .. More fruitful幫助使得... 更有成果
The seminar will promote the activity more fruitful.
參考範文
Dear Mr Genera Manager,
Concerning the seminar you held last Tuesday, I would like to express our sincere appreciation and gratitude to the materials, internship and short-term jobs you provided for our students.
As the leading company in Banking sector, your company enjoys high prestige around the world, as would be expected , this seminar received good feedback among students who plan to work for big companies like yours.
The materials and documents you offered proved to be of great value to our university, especially the case study included, Regarding the internship and short-term jobs, please make up informed of the eligibility of the students in addition to their major, Further more, as our school of Foreign Languages also enjoys a high reputation, we would appreciate it if you could offer job opportunities in this area.
I would like to thank you again and look forward to further cooperation with you!
不知道看了上面的內容大家有什麼感想，對你有啓發就再好不過了。在商務英語考試當中，也許你會遇到難以想象的困難，但是如果你平時做好各項準備，還是要有信心去面對。滬江網校的商務英語課程已經開課了，想學習的不要錯過哦!
