雅思寫作怎麼避免口語化表達
在雅思寫作考試中，很多考生使用過多的口語化表達詞句，其實這對我們的作文來說並不友好，要知道中方和西方的思維方式是不同的。那麼雅思寫作如何避免口語化表達呢?接下來小編爲大家分享一些方法，希望能幫助大家克服這方面的問題。
雅思寫作怎麼避免口語化表達
一，請避免人的主語
口語中我們很習慣用“某個人做某件事”來構成基本句式，以至於議論文中有的考生依然寫的是這樣的句子：
More and more young students go abroad because they want to get better education and find a better job in the future. I think that they may have problems in study and also in life.
上例中第一句的主句和狀語從句中都是以某個人開始的，第二句中主句和賓語從句也是以人做主語。雖然說這兩個句子的WPS(每句中的詞彙數)都超過10個，應該說不能算是寫的特別初級的簡單句，如果句法和詞彙沒有問題還是很有希望達到6分的。但如果全篇都是這樣的句式，整個文章就顯得幼稚，類似於記敘文寫作，絕對突破不了7分。
其實改法很簡單：我們只要避免從“某個人”開始句子就可以了，也就是說用比較客觀的就事論事的態度。如：避免“學生出國”，只寫“出國”;避免“他們想要…”，只寫“想要…”。這樣，上面的句子就可以寫成：go abroad to get better education and find a better job in the future,不但很客觀，而且把原來的主句和從句兩部分精簡處理成了一個動詞短語。既可以做謂語動詞加上原來的一個主語構成句子，也可以用不定式、動名詞和分詞處理爲非謂語動詞做主語、賓語或者狀語，還可以以從句的形式處理。至於原來第一句中的主語young students可以用介詞短語的形式插入不定式或者動名詞短語中，而下面的句子裏的評價部分的內容提上來做主句的謂語，組成一個新的句式。
另外，第二例句中的“have”，一般情況下主語都是某個人，而在寫作中多爲“there be”句型所代替，更加客觀。所以上面的兩個例句就可以合併成一句：
There may be problems in study and also in life for young students to go abroad in order to get better education and find a better job in the future.
這樣合併不但客觀而且精煉，每個單位句子所表達的內容自然就擴大，詞彙密度也相應地增多，自然容易得高分，如果加上個別單詞或短語的替換，就可以達到7分。但切記不可機械照搬範文中的長句，從雅思中國網的學員反饋情況看判爲模板的文章最低分數降至4.5.
更進一步說，“have”和“there be”句型都可以簡化成更簡單的介詞“with”結構，如以下所示：
On the table is a box. There is a cover beside it.
這兩個小句子是小作文的流程圖中經常要用到的具體描寫事物的句型，凡是描寫具有某種屬性或者帶有某種外部特徵都可以用”with”結構表達，所以上述兩句可以合併成：On the table is a box with a cover beside it.
除了一般的“某個人做某件事情”和“…have…”句型，常見的人化主語的句型還有很受考生偏愛的幾個情態動詞，如can, may, should等。一般建議前兩個改成It is likely /possible to do/ that….;後一個改成It is necessary/ imperative/ highly expected/ suggested that sth. be done.的句式，請看下面的例示：
We can go anywhere we like with our bicycle. →It is possible for us to go anywhere we like with our bicycle.
To curb global warming, our government should promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.→To curb global warming, it is imperative that our government promulgate new laws to govern the felling of trees.
歸納起來說，議論文中我們要積極避免“某個人”做主語，儘量用不定式、動名詞或者一個從句做主語，謂語動詞用評價性的動詞充當，這樣就可以由記敘文性質的“過程性句式”順利轉化成更符合議論文文風的客觀評價性的句式。
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二，多使用被動句式
在比較正式的新聞、商務、法律等英語(論壇)文體中，被動句式因爲其更突出客觀性的賓語或者事實被廣爲使用。雅思的圖表分析和議論文都是比較正式的文體，所以我們也應該注意多用被動句式。尤其是在以下兩個方面：
1.主語不確定
Someone murdered the millionaire last night.→The millionaire was murdered last night.
2. 主語是泛指很多人或者大部分人
To improve the air quality, we should reduce the use of private cars. →To improve the air quality, the use of private cars should be reduced.
Most people think that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.→It is widely believed that we can get a large share of benefit in the sales campaign.
被動句的用法不僅體現在主句中，在從句、非謂語動詞短語中都有可能用到，如：
It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to control the software piracy. →It is important for nations all over the world to join hands to have the software piracy controlled.
I don’t expect that she returned. → She is not expected to have returned.
I am not sure whether the college graduates will find jobs in the financially difficult year. →I am not sure whether the college graduates will get employed in the financially difficult year.
但是因爲漢語中本來是沒有被動句式的，所以受漢化思維的影響很多考生不會想到這一點。這就要求我們對此要引起足夠的重視，並且在平時多加練習以培養對其敏感度。
三，注意名詞化句式表達
寫作中把原本用動詞或者形容詞表達的地方換成名詞叫做名詞化(nominalization)。名詞化是爲了避免太多動詞造成的句法處理上的困難，同時也可以把某些陳述型的句式轉化成更客觀的評價句，更符合議論文的文體要求。如：
Our monitor didn’t come today. He has got a flu.
很明顯這兩個小句可以用因果關係的信號詞連成一句：Because our monitor has a flu, he didn’t come today.，但這個because引導的原因狀語從句以及其它的狀語從句是考生們很常用的複合句，雖然看似比較複雜，其實仍然是某個人做主語。如果非謂語動詞掌握得好，可能我們會想到用Having a flu, our monitor didn’t come today.如果我們把前後兩部分分別用一個概括性的名詞來替代，中間加上我們熟悉的表示因果關係的動詞，這個句子就非常符合議論文的風格：The flu caused the absence of our monitor today.或者The absence of our monitor is because of his illness.至少我們可以儘量將其中的一個小句變成名詞，減少某個人做主語的口語化句式的出現頻率。
雖然這種表達方法更爲客觀，句式上更加簡潔，但是用比較抽象的概括性詞彙來寫句子對於越來越趨於低齡化的考生來說的確是個挑戰。但是有一些單詞是我們在寫作中幾乎必須要用到的，平時要備好以下幾個常見的名詞化：lack of(if there is no…), ignorance of (don’t know …), illiteracy in(can’t read…/ can’t use…), failure (didn’t do…)等。而且在具體的使用過程中可以結合介詞with使用，使得句法更加凝練。此外個別單詞也可以利用題目中的動詞的名詞性後綴如： -tion，-ment, -isation, -ness, -ity等或者變成動名詞形式-ing。如：
More younger generations celebrate the western festivals→the celebration of the western festivals by more younger generations
四，避免其他口語化表達
如more and more/ a lot等口語化的短語儘量避免，可以用increasing(ly)， a large number of…/a great deal of…./swarms of…等代替。此外縮略形式也是正式的寫作中要避免的。
雅思寫作真題薈萃1
Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons
It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and examples in your answer.
Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents’generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Some people pay money for the things they want or need. Other people trade products or goods for what they need. Compare the advantages of these two ways of obtaining things. Which way do you prefer? Explain why.
Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? Use specific details to explain your answer.
Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
You want to persuade someone to study your native reasons would you give?Support your answer with specific details.
You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park that you have visited. This might be a city park.a regional park,or a national improvements would you make?Why?Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendations.
雅思寫作真題薈萃2
辨證客觀思維題：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should read only those books that are about real events,real people, and established specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
熟知問題：Films can tell us a lot about the country in which they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies?Use specific examples and details to support your response.
學校教育問題：Some people say that phyical exercise should be a required part of every school r people believe that students should spend the whole day on academic h opinion do you agree with?Give reasons to support your answer.
常見選擇性題：Some people prefer to spend most of their time rs like to be with friends most of the you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?Give reasons to support your answer.
西方關注變化題：If you could invent something product would you develop?Use specific details to explain why this invention in needed.
常見比較題：It has been said."Not everything that is learned is contained in books."Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from your opinion,which source is more important?why?9、6辨證客觀性思維題：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
G類學生問爲何不分開了，其實TASK2是一樣的常見的比較性題目
Because of developments in communication and transportation，countries are becoming more and more is your country becoming more similar to other places in the world?Use specific examples and details support your answer.
西方人關注的“變化”題If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific example to support your answer.
關於學校和教育的話題--People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons(for example,new experiences,career preparation, increased knowledge) do you think people attend colleges?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
熟知問題篇--In general. people are living longer uss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and detail to develop your essay.
雅思寫作真題薈萃3
A類：Over past 50 years, young people gain status and power but old people have lost. What is the cause and is it a good development or bad development?
G類：Task 1:You and your family are living in a rented accommodation in an English-speaking country,You are not satisfied because there are something wrong with the furniture. So write a letter to the landlord andask how to resole the problem.
Task 2:Young people are exposed to a great amount of information such as film, book, what ways they give bad influence on young people and explain the reason, how to reduce the bad influence with examples.
A類：Strong tradition對一個nation有civilize的作用do you think government should subsidizes the musicians, artists, actors or drama companies, do u agree or disagree, what should government do?
G類：People doing different kinds of work enjoy different amount of holiday time. Should people have the same amount of leisure time? Give your opinion using some of your own experience.
A類：Some people believe that a country should have the moral obligation to help the other country and some of the people think that exist the misspending of the government and the aid money can not be got by the poor. What is your opinion?
G類：Some people think that children’s lives will be different from their own. Whit is your opinion? Explain the reasons by your experience and examples.
A類：Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today’s society, therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What’s your opinion?
G類：Today some person has to work away from his family, what is the advantages and disadvantages? Give your opinion and some explains of your experience.
A類：Someone say the age of book is past, the info will be presented by some multimedia tools such as video, computer, television and film , others think the book and the written words will be necessary for spread info & complete education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
G類：The culture of different countries are becoming similar so there is no pint for people to go traveling abroad for they could have same experience at home agree or disagree.
A類：有些人把動物當作寵物有些人則當作食物和衣服的資源你覺的呢請從以上兩個方面討論並寫出自己的觀點
G類：居住在城市裏的和居住在農村裏的人的性格有什麼影響舉例說明Your character is strongly influenced by the placeswheresyou grew up.–In what ways can growing up in a city or growing up in the countryside influenced people’s character? Give you relative experiences.
A類：現在很多國家的學校都分男校和女校談一下它的優缺點
G類：有人認爲National Costumes有助於保持傳統故認爲人們要每天穿着National Costumes. Agree? Explain. In many countries, people don’t wear their national costume. Many people think it will forget their history and tradition. So, people should be encouraged to wear national costume every day. You agree or disagree. (This is argument topic, u should support one or another)
A類：More and more women go out to work. It is responsibility of government to provide staff and facilities for children of working mother, free of charge. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
G類：現在的食物和cooking都在改變請說明傳統食物改變原因和看法結合所在地方的情況舉例子
A類：現在很多國家的學校存在很嚴重的問題是由於學生的態度引起的這些問題是怎樣形成的你有什麼建議來改變這種情況In many countries schools have several problems of students behavior, Please give some cause of it and some suggest.
G類：一些人認爲母親不能同時出去工作和成爲一個好母親所以政府應該付給母親工資讓她們好好在家帶孩子你的觀點用你的例子和你的經驗說明
A類：英國和國際旅遊業的流行會不會導致小語種和小民族的傷害The spread of English and development of the international tourism have some negative effects to the country’s language andculture development? What extent do you agree or disagree?
G類：有人喜歡從事高風險運動如登山等人們說不值得讓救援人員冒生命危險去救他們應對生命負責對嗎說自己的觀點舉例
A類：體育專業是否應該拿錢比其它重要的專業多，兩方面討論，還要舉例子Successful sports professionals earn a great deal much more than people in other important professions describe two views and your opinion.
G類：關於VIOLIANTFILMS你有什麼看法對人有什麼影響根據你的經驗說說?
A類：寫某篇研究報道發現NOUNG WOMEN的犯罪率在升高，請給出一些POSSIBLE的理由和辦法The rate of young women crimes is rising in the current society. What are the causes and how to solve it?
G類：Parent should limit children time of watching TV and playing computer game, others Insister children spend reading books, agree or disagree?
A類：Traveling abroad work for period of months or years, advandges or disadvandges to people and country
G類：Do you think poeple do different jobs they should have different time holidayare you agree or disagree , give your reason an explain.
