託福寫作高分怎樣造句
託福寫作高分的鑄就過程實數不易，需要很多的積累，所以今天小編爲大家帶來的就是高分造句，一個好的句子能夠詮釋作者的意圖，讓閱卷官有耳目一新的感覺，寫作分數自然就會得高分，讓我們一起來看看如何造句吧!
託福寫作高分怎樣造句?
I 準確的句子表達
1.句型分析
英語的句型包括以下幾種，簡單句、複合句、並列句、並列複合句等。在新託福寫作中，一般使用複合句，輔以並列句和並列複合句，當然肯定要有簡單句，做到長短句相結合。下面摘抄幾個句子給大家認識並分析一下複合句和並列複合句。
though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
這句話是一個複合句，由even though引導的讓步狀語從句。
challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
這句話中是一個複合句。with介詞結構中，有一個that引導的同位語從句對result進行解釋說明。
c.I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句話是一個並列複雜句。and 連接了兩個句子，是一個並列句;because引導的原因狀語從句。
low writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
這句話同樣是並列複雜句。由and連接兩個句子，成爲並列句，再一個which引導的定語從句。
2.有問題的句子的列舉
考生寫的句子容易出現三個問題：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接連句，三是句子連接不正確。
1)破碎句
所謂破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是沒有謂語(或者說謂語是動詞的非謂語形式，如分詞)，或者是從句單獨成句。
破碎句：She singing alone. (無謂語，singing是現在分詞)
正確句：She is singing alone.
破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句單獨成句)
正確句：He did not come because he was sick.
2)接連句
所謂接連據，就是兩個句子直接連在一起，既未使用連詞，也未使用正確的標點符號。
接連句:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句一:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句二:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3)句子連接不正確
所謂句子連接不正確，就是兩個獨立的句子之間以逗號連接，這是不合英語語法的。正確的做法是以連詞、分號、冒號、句號等連接兩個句子。
不正確句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
正確句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
II 高分表達
除了在句式上長短句相結合準確表達外，三立在線建議新托福考生要使用一些特殊的句式，以使句型多樣化。句型多樣化也是作文得到高分的條件之一。除了我們之前經常提到的高分句式，如倒裝句、強調句、狀語前置、插入語等，筆者還提出另外一個句式的多樣變化，即主語多樣化。下面筆者將列舉幾個句子概括介紹前面四種句型，而重點分析主語多樣化。
正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒裝句: Only in extreme cases does luck work. (否定詞位於句首的倒裝。)
正常句：The internet provides people access to the latest information.
強調句：It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (強調the internet)
正常句：The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
狀語前置句：Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
正常句:However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
插入語：New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (連詞however做插入語)
主語多樣：
1.她突然想到了一個主意。
She suddenly had an idea.
通常情況下，考生會馬上對這句話進行翻譯，基本不會動句子結構。但是以人作爲主語的英語句子總是不能夠很吸引人，所以這個句子如果稍微做下修改，以後面的賓語“主意”做主語，這個句子會發生一些變化。
An idea suddenly occurred to her.
2.他開車心不在焉，幾乎闖禍。
He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.
這句話依然是拿人做主語，稍微改一下，把心不在焉這個形容詞的名詞形式做主語，會大不相同。
His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.
3.美利堅合衆國創立於1789年。
The United States of America was founded in 1789.
這句話沒有任何錯誤，但是不夠多樣，可以用時間作主語。
The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.
III 實用句型
在文章的最後，三立在線爲大家列舉幾個新托福考試中可以使用的套用句型，爲一些寫句子摸不着頭緒的考生提供幫助。
pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.
努力準備新托福考試是值得的。
ing is more important than to receive education.
沒有比接受教育更重要的了。
reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.
白領壓力日益增加的原因是他們在事業上有所追求。
is time the related department took proper measures.
(虛擬句式)相關部門早該採取適當的措施了。
託福寫作如何改進轉折句
“there be句型”變爲被動語態
試比較
1. She used to be indifferent to the outside world, but an interloper changed her.
2. Her indifference to the outside world was changed by and interloper.
把but後面的句子改爲短小插入語
試比較
1. Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novelsand literature analyses, but she hardly succeeded in any of these endeavors at the very beginning.
2. Driven by an interest in words, Claire kept trying poetry, novels and literature analyses—all with little initial success.
把but後面部分改爲更緊湊的從句
試比較
1. It was meant to be a brief parting, but it turned into a long, lingering one.
2. What was meant to be a brief parting turned into a long, lingering one.
第二句讀起來更加集中、緊湊，並且去掉了"It was, but it…”等雞肋部分。
積累一些可能替換but的連接詞
e.g. however/nonetheless/nevertheless/yet/whereas/while...
試比較
1. Once arriving home, she starts to review all the notes, not necessarily because the teacher requires her to do so,but because she encourages herself to study hard.
2. Once arriving home,she starts to review all the notes, as much from the requirement of the teacher,as from herself-encouragement.
總結
對於but這一最爲常見的轉折，我們可以從“是否可以直接去掉?是否可以改爲插入語等句子成分?是否可以改爲更爲緊湊的從句?是否有其他替換表達?”這個方面進行思考。
但應該指出，應該建立在“自己有把握判斷原句與改進後句子的風格與質量”的基礎上進行。有時候，不一定改的就比原句更好，短的不一定就更簡潔。
託福寫作解析:比較對比句怎麼寫
Movies: serious or entertaining?
Therefore, the merits(advantage) encompassed within serious movies far outweigh those of entertaining movies.
Adervertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits.
In reality, compared with other sources of negative influences, advertising only plays a small role. the eating habits are formed on the basis of many complicated efore, it is rash to consider it a major cause of those unhealthy eating habits.
Compared with A, B...中的A和B是兩個同類的事物
託福寫作解析:假設條件句怎麼寫
It is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
If a high school student is about to leave school soon, it is necessary for him to have a most suitable plan before the graduation ceremony begins.
Teachers should give students homework everyday.
If teacher had been checking the students' progress with daily homework assignments, they might not have failed the test.
過去的虛擬，把反面的例子變成正面的評論
if sb had done, sb might/would have done
Traveling alone is better than travelling with a companion.
But for the assistance from a companion, travelers would be exposed to more dangers on the way.
現在或將來的情況：but for sb/sth, sb would do sth
過去的情況： but for sb/sth, sb would have done
