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由於英漢兩種語言在積句成篇的規則和習慣上的差異,翻譯時往往要對原語句子進行分。分的基本原則是以命題所構成的主謂結構爲單位。下面小編就跟你們詳細介紹下翻譯英語句子方法,希望對你們有用。

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  翻譯英語句子方法如下:

其基本過程是:將原文分成一個個命題,並將命題重新組成主謂結構小句來翻譯成譯語,並按譯語積句成篇的規則加以整合。分之後,尤其要注意分出來的各個小句之間的邏輯關係,在翻譯表達時,用譯語的約束機制進行積句成篇。

英語分時可以按下列標記進行:限定動詞,從句標誌詞,非謂語動詞,獨立主格,介詞短語,形容詞和副詞(主要是小品副詞和adj+ly副詞)。

漢語分時可以按動詞、形容詞、介詞來分。

名家翻譯

(1)(a)She was small and slight in person; (b)pale, (c)sandy-haired, and (d)with eyes habitually cast down: (e)when they looked up (f)they were very large, (g)odd, and (h)attractive, (i)so attractive, (j)that the Reverend Mr. Crisp, (k)fresh from Ox ford, and (l)curate (m)to the Vicar of Chiswick, (n)the Reverend Mr. Flowerdew, (o)fell in love with Miss Sharp. (W.M. Thackeray:Vanity Fair)

(a)她身量瘦小,(b)臉色蒼白,(c)頭髮是淡黃色的。(d)她慣常低眉垂目,(e)擡起眼來看人的時候,(g)眼睛顯得很特別,(f)不但大,(h)而且動人。(n)契息克的弗拉沃丟牧師(m)手下有一個副牧師,(l)名叫克里斯波,(k)剛從牛津大學畢業,(j)竟(i)因此(o)愛上了她。

譯析:原文爲一句,可分出15個命題。譯文也也保留了15個命題,因此,保持了原文的內容的完整性,譯文分成三個句子,主要信息命題句(a-e和o)保持原文順序。試比較:修改後的譯文。

(a)她身量瘦小,(b)臉色蒼白,(c)頭髮是淡黃色的。(d)她慣常低眉垂目,(e)擡起眼來看人的時候,(f)眼睛顯得很大,(g)很特別,(h)很動人,(i)動人得(j)就連克里斯波牧師也(o)愛上了她。克里斯波(l)是(n)契息克的弗拉沃丟牧師(m)手下的一個副牧師,(k)剛從牛津大學畢業。

(2)(a)A fearful man, (b)all in coarse grey, (c)with a great iron on his leg. (d)A man with no hat, and (e)with (f)broken shoes, and (g)with an old rag tied round his head. (h)A man who had been soaked in water, and (i)smothered(j) in mud, and (k)lamed by stones, and (l)cut by flints, and (m)stung by nettles, and (n)torn by briars; (o)who limped, and (p)shivered, and (q)glared and (r)growled; and (s)whose teeth chattered in his head (t)as he seized me by the chin.(Charles Dickens: Expectations)

(a)好一個可怕的人!(b)穿一身灰色粗布衣服,(c)腿上拴一副大鐵鐐。(d)頭上也不戴一頂帽子,(g)只裹着一塊破布,(f)一雙鞋子破爛不堪。(h)他剛在水裏泡過,(j)滿頭滿臉都是爛泥,(i)悶得他透不過氣來;(k)兩條腿給亂石堆子絆得一瘸一拐,(l)給碎石片兒劃出一條條創痕,(m)給蕁麻戳得疼痛難捱,(n)給荊棘扯得皮開肉裂;(o)走起來高一腳低一腳,(p)一邊走一邊抖,(q)又瞪眼又(r)咆哮。他趕過來,(t)一手抓住我的下巴,(s)一口牙齒捉對兒廝打。(王科一譯)

譯析:此段有三個非主謂句,特點是:定語+名詞(+定語)。這種句式起環境烘托的作用,漢譯時一般採用分法和移位法,將英語 “定語+中心詞”結構譯爲漢語描寫句句式:主語+描寫性謂語。

舉一反三

一、分原則

分法的總原則是分後各個小句能保持原語順序儘量保持。如果因保持原語順序而導致不符合譯語語法習慣或意思不明時,則必須加以移位。

二、分技巧

(一)英譯漢

1.單詞分

1)名詞分成句子

(1)A movie of me leaving that foxhole would look like a shell leaving a rifle.

我離開那個單人掩體速度之快,要是拍成電影的話,會象出膛的子彈一樣。

(2) Years may wrinkle the skin, but to give up enthusiasm wrinkles the soul.

歲月悠悠,肌膚易衰老;熱忱消卻,靈魂更易頹唐。

2)形容詞或定語分爲句

形容詞或定語分爲句的原則:

英語:adj+NP

漢語: NP(, (這)(NP)是+)adj+(的)。

(1)I returned home, and suffered all the afternoon; suffered all through an unconscious and unrefreshing dinner.

我回到家裏,折騰了整個下午;折騰了整個晚餐,晚餐無滋無味,了無感覺。

(2) There were the same mountains and the same lovely valley at their feet.

山還是那些山,山腳下,谿還是那條谿,依然那麼秀美。

翻譯賞析

In the garden the sparrow chants—a desultory second courtship, a subdued passion, in keeping with the great heat, love in summertime, relaxed and languorous.

花園裏,麻雀啾啾——彷彿是再度尋愛,懶心無腸;彷彿是盛夏纔有的情愫,熱而不烈;彷彿是夏日之愛,讓人輕鬆,也讓人倦慵。

譯析:原句中desultory和subdued作定語,漢譯時移位於謂語,從而分成小句來翻譯。同時採用易格而譯的技巧通過增益“放佛”將原文破折號後的暗喻譯爲明喻。3)小品副詞或派生副詞adj+ly分爲句:

英語小品副詞和修飾整個句子的副詞,漢譯時可以按下列規則分成句子。

小品副詞分格式:

英語:NP+小品副詞

漢語:NP+謂語

Adj+ly副詞分格式:

英語:(1)adj+ly+S +…V…(=It is (was) adj that S+V)

漢語:1) S+V (,(這/那)是+)adj+(的)。

2)無主句,+S+V。

3)形容詞+“的”是+S+V

描寫性派生副詞分格式:

英語:S++ly

漢語:主語+謂語, 名詞+adj

(1)My head kept humming, “A blue trip slip for an eight-cent fare, a buff trip slip for a six-cent fare,” and so on and so on, without peace or respite.

腦海裏不斷地轟鳴着“藍色票,八分錢;黃色票,六分錢,” 如此反覆,從不間斷,沒有片刻的安寧,沒有片刻的稍息。

(2)No judgment can be rightly formed either of my method or of the discoveries to which it leads, by means of anticipations (that is to say, of the reasoning which is now in use); since I cannot be called on to abide by the sentence of a tribunal which is itself on trial.

用臆測(即現行的推理)來對我的方法或者由此得出的發現加以評判,那是不恰當的;因爲一個自身正在接受審判的法庭,是不能強迫我去服從它所做出的判決。

(3)Amelia took the news very palely and calmly.(William, Makepeace Thackeray:Vanity Fair)

愛米利亞得信的時候,顏色蒼白,樣子倒很鎮靜。

拓展練習1

翻譯下列句子,注意斜體字詞的分。

(1)That region was the most identifiable trouble spot.

(2)The first is (the ambition)of those who desire to extend their own power in their native country, a vulgar and degenerate kind (of ambition).

(3)They, not surprisingly, did not respond at all.

(4) Constitutionally, Putin was to offer up a progress report at this yearly address.

(5)We cannot politely turn down their invitation.

(6)Japan tries vainly to blame us for the breakdown of the China-Japan relations.

2.非謂語短語分法

1)分詞短語分成句子

分詞分理據與原則:英語中任何分詞都可以找到其邏輯主語,這樣,邏輯主語和分詞便構成一個主謂結構。這個主謂位結構翻譯成漢語自然就構成了句子。

分詞短語分原則:

英語:(邏輯主語)… +分詞短語(V+ing, V+ed)

漢語:(邏輯主語)… +動詞短語。

(1) I was a mile from Thornfield, in a lane noted for wild roses in summer,for nuts and blackberries in autumn,and even now possessing a coral treasures in hips and haws.

我此時離桑菲爾德還有一英里的路程,正走在一條小徑上,這條小徑夏天以野薔薇聞名,秋天以堅果和黑莓著稱,即使是現在,小徑上也還長有一些珊瑚珍寶般的野薔薇果和山楂。

(2)The days of his youth appeared like dreams before him, and he recalled the serious moment when his father placed him at the entrance of the two roads——one leading to a peaceful, sunny place, covered with flowers, fruits and resounding with soft, sweet songs; the other leading to a deep, dark cave, which was endless, where poison flowed instead of water and where devils and poisonous snakes hissed and crawled.

青春年華如夢一般浮現眼前,老人想起了人生的關鍵時刻,他的父親將他放在人生岔路口:一條通往祥和明媚的地方,那裏花香果甜,歌聲婉轉;一條通向黑暗幽深的洞穴,那裏深不可測,到處毒液橫流,不見清水,四處惡魔肆虐,毒蛇嘶嘶爬行。

翻譯賞析

For everyone (besides the errors common to human nature in general) has a cave or den of his own, which refracts and discolors the light of nature, owing either to his own proper and peculiar nature; or to his education and conversation with others; or to the reading of books, and the authority of those whom he esteems and admires; or to the differences of impressions, accordingly as they take place in a mind preoccupied and predisposed or in a mind indifferent and settled; or the like.(Francis Bacon)

因爲每一個人(人性共有的錯誤除外)都有自己的洞穴,從而扭曲改變自然的本色,這要麼歸咎於他固有的特性,要麼歸咎於他所受的教育程度以及與他人的社會交往;或者是歸咎於他所閱讀的書籍以及他所尊敬欽佩的權威;或者是歸咎於因人而異的印象:有的人心有成見、胸中有數;有的人冷漠麻木、冥頑不化等等。(分詞和形容詞分爲句)

譯析:句中which爲關係詞,譯爲“這”指代中心詞,四個(owning) to 介詞短語易爲動詞與“refracts and discolors the light of nature”搭配,從而分出四個小句“要麼......要麼......;或者......或者......”。句中分詞和形容詞preoccupied, predisposed,indifferent和settled與mind分別分成四個小句。

拓展練習2

翻譯下列句子,注意斜體字詞的分。

(1) In sciences founded on opinions and dogmas, the use of anticipations and logic is good; for in them the object is to command assent to the proposition, not to master the thing.

(2)What seems to come nearest to one is that of the waterspouts, often seen in the voyage over the Atlantic Ocean toward either of the Indies.

(3)Sunrays filtered in wherever they could, driving out darkness and choking the shadows.

2)同位語名詞短語分成句子

同位語分的理據與原則:英語中本位語和同位語可以是名詞(短語)也可以是句子;但翻譯時要把同位語分成句子,同位語必須是一個帶有定語的名詞短語或句子,這樣同位語才能分成句子。圖示如下:

同位語短語分成句:

英語: NP1(S) (“,”、“――”、“:”、“namely, that is, vz.”) +attr+NP2+(attr).

漢語: NP1(S), (這/所謂)(NP1(S))是+attr+NP2+(的)。

(3)The last time I tried to purify myself by fire, I managed to acquire a zoo in the process and am still supporting it and carrying heavy pails of water to the animals, a task that is sometimes beyond my strength.

上一次想法用火燒來淨化自己時,我總算弄到了一個動物園,至今都還維持着那個動物園,挑着沉重的水桶給動物喂水,這活兒有時還真讓我吃不消。

翻譯賞析

The U.S. Chamber of Commerce is pressing Congress to lift cold war trade restrictions on Russia, a country Romney has labeled America’s “No. 1 geopolitical foe.”

美國商會正在向國會施壓要求解除對俄羅斯的冷戰式貿易限制,而羅姆尼卻給俄羅斯貼上了“第一地緣政治敵人”的標籤。

譯析:a country Romney has labeled America’s “No. 1 geopolitical foe.”是其Russsia的同位語,翻譯時分爲小句,同時增益連接詞“而”。

3)介詞短語分成句子

介詞短語的理據與原則:英語介詞分爲兩種:虛義介詞和實義介詞。虛義介詞本身無意義(in, on, at),只有和名詞(短語)才能構成實義,因此,翻譯時,虛義介詞本身無法分成句,只能分其中的名詞(短語);實義介詞往往含有動詞含義,翻譯只要找到實義介詞的邏輯主語就可以分成句子。

介詞短語分成句:

英語:(邏輯主語)… +介詞+NP

漢語:(邏輯主語)… +動詞+NP。

(3) Tired from my run and the Texas heat, I got a cup of water and sat under a tree with the dog.

因爲跑步再加上德克薩斯的炎熱的天氣,我感到很累,我要了杯水,挨着狗狗坐在樹下。

(4) Forty-two years ago, on my maiden voyage in the family car with my mother in the passenger seat, I accidentally hit a dog. On Easter Sunday.

四十二年前,我開着家轎和坐在副駕位的母親開始了我的處女行,途中我意外地撞倒了一條狗。那天正好是復活節。

4)獨立主格分爲句:

所謂獨立主格,是指英語中帶有自己主語的非限制性從句,從意思上看,仍然是相對完整。故漢譯時可以分成句子。

獨立主格結構分成句:

英語:Np+adj/小品副詞/pp/participle/動詞不定式/同位語

漢語:Np+謂語

(5)When Miss Emily Grierson died, our whole town went to her funeral: the men through a sort of respectful affection for a fallen monument, the women mostly out of curiosity to see the inside of her house.

艾米莉·格里爾遜小姐走了,我們全鎮的人都去爲她送葬:男人們出於一種崇敬之情,因爲一座豐碑倒塌了;女人們大多出於好奇之心,想進屋子看看究竟。

翻譯賞析

(a)The mornings are the pleasantest times in the apartment, (b)exhaustion having set in, (c)the sated mosquitoes at rest on ceiling and walls, (d)sleeping it off, (e)the room a swirl of tortured bedclothes and abandoned garments, (f)the vines in their full leafiness filtering the hard light of day, (g)the air conditioner silent at last, (h)like the mosquitoes. ( 2012,《第三界<英語世界>杯翻譯比賽英譯漢原文》)

清晨呆在公寓裏很是愜意;倦慵襲身;飽餐的蚊子停在屋頂和牆上休憩打盹,房間裏全是卷裹皺褶的牀單、廢棄的外衣;藤蔓青青繁茂,遮擋着白日的強光,空調就像蚊子一樣,終於安靜了下來。

譯析:英語中的獨立主格結構,具有靜態描寫,補充信息的作用。本句可分爲8個小句,其中(a)爲主句,(b) (-(g)爲獨立主格結構,表示靜態描寫,翻譯時翻譯成漢語的描寫小句。

5)從句標誌處分爲

(6)Yet surely (a)it is not fair (b)that the credit of true history should be lessened (c)because it has sometimes been injured and wronged by fables. (Francis Bacon:The New Organon)

當然,(c)真正的歷史有時因受到寓言的中傷,從而(b)導致聲譽受損,(a)這的確很不公平。

(7) (a)Nay, (b)it is obvious (c)that when a man runs the wrong way, (d) the more active and swift he is, (e)the further he will go astray. (Francis Bacon:The New Organon)

(a)非但如此,(c)人一旦走上歧途,(d)步伐越加快捷,(e)就迷失得就越加遙遠。(b)這是顯而易見的事。

翻譯賞析

(1) (a)It was hard (b)for me to accept (c)that it had mostly been about sex for him, (d)that and some damsel-in-distress fantasy (e)I seemed to have dispelled, (f)because I think (g)it’s possible (h)that he did care for me at some point.

此句可以分爲6個小句。其中(a)與(f)構成因果關係,因此,翻譯時將(a)句後移儘量靠近(f)句,這樣(f)表示的原因就清晰起來。(c)和(d)屬於 (a)句accept並列的賓語從句,翻譯時,在每一個賓語從句前增益謂語動詞“很難接受”;(e)屬於定語從句,(g)屬於(f)think的賓語從句,(h)是主語從句。試比較下列譯文:

譯文一:如果說自己頂多就是他的一個性伴侶,(如果)說我的幻想——那種只有多愁善感的少女纔有的幻想——彷彿已悄然而失,我很難接受,因爲我覺得他在某些方面可能還是很關心我的。

譯文二:回想起和他一起的日子,我能想到的都是一些和性有關的記憶,這讓我難以接受。一些女性特有的被保護感從我身上逐漸消失,因爲在某種程度上他還是在意我的。

(2) (a)Days would pass and (b)I’d grit my teeth (c)to avoid picking up the phone, (d)like an addict in rehab; (e)it felt (f)as if toxins were slowly leaving my body.

此句可分爲6個小句。其中(e)中的it指代整個(e)小句,(f)小句中ing my body表示對將來的假設,帶有目的的含義。是比較下列兩個譯文

譯文一:日子一天天地過去,我咬牙強忍着不去接電話,就像吸毒者戒毒一般,彷彿要讓毒癮慢慢地離開我的身體。

譯文二:日子總會過去,我咬緊牙關,不去接電話,像吸毒者一樣;那感覺就像毒液從我身體裏慢慢散去一樣。

拓展練習3

翻譯下列句子,注意斜體字詞的分

(1) The station chief would have to be close to the director,a member of the inner circle.

(2) The military is forbidden to “kill” the vessel, a relatively easy task.

(3) He arrived in Washington at a ripe moment internationally.

(4)Energy can neither be created nor destroyed, a universally accepted law.

(5) Their power increased with their number.

(二)漢譯英

漢語句子分,一般按照“主謂結構”、“定中結構”和句子變換來進行分。

1.流水句各個小句分爲獨立句。

流水句中各個小句如果內容較多,而且呈現並列敘述時,可以分爲獨立句。

(1)(B611M)先進的戰術地地導彈武器系統,用於精確打擊裝甲集羣、部隊集結地、防控設施、機場、指揮中心等各類地面軍事目標,用於火力壓制和火力支援。

B611M is an advanced tactical ground-to-ground missile weapon system. It can precisely attack various types of ground military targets such as armored groups, troop concentration area, air defense facilities, airfields and command centers. It is mainly used for fire suppression and fire support.

2.連動句分爲兩個獨立句子。

(2)(a)張家窨子閣樓上的書房裏,(b)順慶油號老闆張恆泰,正在(c)關着門(d)訓斥自己的獨生子張復禮。

(a)In the Zhangs’ Yinzi house, (b)Zhang Hengtai, the boss of Shunqing Oil Company, (c)shut himself up in the study of the attic. (d)He was tongue-lashing his only son Zhang Fuli.

試比較:

In the Zhangs’ Yinzi house, Zhang Hengtai, the boss of Shunqing Oil Company, was tongue-lashing his only son Zhang Fuli in the study of the attic with the door closed.

(3)(a)在此情況下,(b)我們重申關於支持增長和維護金融穩定的強烈承諾,(c)並強調發達經濟體需要採取適當措施以重建信心,(d)促進增長並確保經濟強勁復甦。

(a)In such circumstances, (b)we reaffirm our strong commitment to support growth and foster financial stability. (c)We also underscore the need for appropriate action to be taken by advanced economies in order to rebuild confidence,(d) foster growth and secure a strong recovery.

3.定語分爲句或同位語

(4) (a)身材魁梧的張復禮(b)栽着腦殼,(c)耷着眼皮,(d)一聲不吭地(e)站在父親跟前,(f)任憑數落。(李懷蓀,2011《湘西祕史》)

Zhang Fuli, (a)a burly-set young man, (e)were now standing (d)silently before his father, (b) with his head bowed and (c) his eyelids drooped, (f) letting himself at the mercy of his father’s scolding.

4.小句主語變換處分爲句

(5)“你倒好,偏在這時候出了事,滿浦陽鎮傳得個百醜,叫你老子怎麼去跟劉家人交待?!”

“But now you, you did such a foolish deed, and made it public in all parts of the Puyang Town. How do I give your father-in-law a proper explanation?!”

5.動靜轉換處分爲句。

我的母親很高興,但也藏着許多淒涼的神情,教我坐下,歇息,喝茶,且不談搬家的事。(魯迅,《故鄉》)

Though Mother was delighted,she was also trying to hide a certain feeling of told me to sit down and rest and have some tea