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託福寫作的十三個萬能理由

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託福寫作的十三個萬能理由

託福寫作的十三個萬能理由

[if !supportLists]一. [endif]成就感(achievement)

關鍵詞句: a sense ofachievement virtuouscycle良性循環 grand feat/exploit 輝煌的業績 attainment of goals elevate our self-esteem be conductive to self-actualization 有助於自我實現

萬能段落:By doing (something), we can enjoy a sense of feat of accomplishing is conductive to self-actualization, which will inevitably elevate our self-esteem. Inflated esteem will proportionally contribute to even more solid achievement. This is virtuous cycle toward a better career. For example, I have a relative who works in a big company. He was once awarded the opportunity to travel abroad that excited him for quite a long time. After that he worked even harder and gained the elevated esteem.

[if !supportLists]二. [endif]被認可感(acknowledgement)

關鍵詞句: A willing ox任勞任怨的人 selfless contribution the stat of being recognized a sense of belonging provide satisfaction motivation for further improvement

萬能段落: By acknowledgement,I mean the state of being recognized. When we are recognized by our company (school/college/group/community or society), we can experience a sense of belonging. The feeling of being recognized provides satisfaction and motivation for further improvement. Hence, when a person can be identified by others, the subsequent outcome can be beyond imagination. Bill Gates, through luck, diligence, and team spirit leads Microsoft to splendor. And he distributes his wealth generously, which won him a name: the greatest philanthropist around the world. His success is acknowledged by our society. And his satisfaction index can be higher than that of any other peers.

[if !supportLists]三. [endif]健康(health)

關鍵詞句: ingredients to sound health健康的要素 physical health psychological health well-adjusted to the society sound health as fit as a fiddle 身體好 discard health hazard robust strength體力充沛Health is above wealth.

萬能段落:Fresh air, clean water and nutritious food are indispensable ingredients to sound if we live in good environment and enjoy healthful diet, our physical health can be guaranteed. Also if we have positive hobbies like reading and other mental pursuits, our psychological health can be elevated. Anyway, health is above wealth, we should exert our efforts to discard health hazard in order to attain a better life.

[if !supportLists]四. [endif]安全(safety)

關鍵詞句: be protected against failure, damage a sense of securityfacilitate the harmony of society Safety is the top priority.

萬能段落:Safety refers to the condition of beingprotected against failure, damage, error, accidents, harm, et cetera. Safety is usually our main concern.

[if !supportLists]五. [endif]方便(convenience)

關鍵詞句: perform daily errands從事日常業務 get easy access to 容易接近 do not have to exert ourselves too much 不用太費力氣 Convenience matters.便利至關重要

萬能段落:Convenience means being suitable and useful for us to carry out daily something is convenient and easy to be made use of, we get easy access it, then the potential can be fully exploited. We do not have to exert ourselves too much to obtain the benefit. As a result, we can devote more time and efforts to accomplishing other business that is urgent and pivotal.

[if !supportLists]六. [endif]溝通(communication)

關鍵詞句: people skill人際交往能力 disparate people各色人等 bare one’s heart敞開心扉 exchange of ideas transmission of messages harmony of the relationship communication can be heart-warming channels of communication are open

萬能段落:Communication is about the exchange of ideas, opinions and information through written or spoken words, symbols or smooth exchange of information and ideas between disparate people can be thrilling and heart-warming. When we bare our hearts to communicate, we can eliminate the conflict or contradiction. Thus, the distance among people will surely be shortened. Thus, we can achieve the purpose of transmission of messages. In the meanwhile, the interaction arises, which definitely improves teamwork. Hence, we can harvest (garner/reap) both the success of cooperation and the harmony of the relationship.

[if !supportLists]七. [endif]持久性(durability)

關鍵詞句: lastingnessof goods deep impression eternal/everlasting impact far-reaching influence unforgettable memory garner/assimilate nutrition汲取營養

萬能段落:By durability,I mean goods may have lastingness; love is eternal; friendship is everlasting. When something gives us deep impression, we surely will have an unforgettable memory. For example, paper writing and classroom discussions are more durable in our mind than examinations can give. When we build a library, we build a cradle of knowledge. This is a transformation of life, which can be durable and far-reachin

[if !supportLists]八. [endif]願望(desire)

關鍵詞句: crave for/long for/yearn for/pine for creatures of desire慾望之物 meet our needs to one’s heart’s content盡情享受 fulfill one’s dream satisfy one’s vanity 滿足虛榮心

萬能段落:Desire refers to our hope or are all creatures of desires. We try our best/endeavor to satisfy our desire and vanity: the desire to relax to our heart’s content; the desire to gain more knowledge; the desire to earn big money and the desire to be loved. To meet one’s desire is to enjoy a happy life. Hence, we are all willing to sacrifice our time and efforts to make our heart’s desire fulfilled.

[if !supportLists]九. [endif]效率(efficient)

關鍵詞句: make full use of resource not to squander efficiency-conscious take a shortcut走捷徑 Efficiency is gold. We use half of the effort, but we can double the result.

萬能段落:Being efficiency means not to waste and not to times we use half of the effort, but we can double the result. Modern people chase after efficiency that is the catchword around the globe. Our work efficiency can be enhanced if we adopt proper method; our learning efficiency can be elevated if we take a shortcut. Anyway, when we make full use of the devices at our hands, we may achieve efficiency, which can save our time and efforts.

[if !supportLists]十. [endif]節約(economical)

關鍵詞句: money- conscious重金錢的 cut down the price steady development Waste not, and want not. 不浪費,不短缺 Husband energy, and cut emission. 節能減排 To save is to earn Our society is economy-driven.節約型社會 A penny saved is a penny earned.

萬能段落:Being economical means using the minimum of time or resources necessary for g economical or money- saving is vital to people as an English proverb puts it that “ a penny saved is a penny earned”. When we achieve economy in expenditure, we are in fact making money work for us. When we bargain and cut down the price, we are money-conscious; when we take bus instead of driving our own cars, we are reducing the cost for petrol.

[if !supportLists]十一. [endif]環保(environmental)

關鍵詞句: emit hazardous materials alternative energy maintain ecological balance go green多種樹,講環保 environmental awareness environment-friendly reduce, reuse, and recycle sustainable development exhaust natural resources There is no boundary between human and nature.

萬能段落:Being environmental is related to the natural environment, its protection and order to maintain ecological balance, our environment awareness should be enhanced. When we are green-washed; when we become environment-friendly, we may realize three “r”s: reduce, reuse, and recycle. These three ”r”s are vital to the preservation of a cleaner, better environment that will benefit people’s wellbeing.

[if !supportLists]十二. [endif]經驗(experience)

關鍵詞句: undergo ordeal first-hand experience accumulation of knowledge Experience is wealth. Experience is a helmsman guiding our r people’s experience can be of help.它山之石可以攻玉 The proof of the pudding is in the eating.事物的好壞需要經過實踐檢驗

萬能段落: Experience refers to the accumulation of knowledge or skill that result from direct participation in events or experience is a wealth that can enrich our life. When we enjoy modern educational facilities and indulge in the prestigious academic atmosphere, we can harvest valuable educational experience. When we undergo the training of expertise experiences serve as an enlightenment brightening our career path.

[if !supportLists]十三. [endif]情感(emotion)

關鍵詞句: bare one’s heart share ups and downs facilitate communication harmonious relationship form an emotional tie/emotional attachment Harmony spurs efficiency.

萬能段落:By emotion,I refer to joy, sensitivity, pleasure, anger and so on. If people can share emotions, they can form an emotional tie among them, which will link their feelings. This emotional attachment is beneficial to harmonious relationship as well as to the fulfillment of a project. For example, my good friend and I are on good emotional terms. We share sorrow and happiness. As a result, our lives become happier and more enjoyable.

  託福寫作備考之語塊積累篇

同學們在寫作時有沒有這樣的困惑:爲什麼背了這麼多年的單詞但是感覺寫作文的時候還是寫不出好詞佳句?或者寫出來的作文常常帶有中式思維的痕跡? 其實中國人學寫詩就有一句古話叫做“熟讀唐詩三百首,不會作詩也會吟”。由此曉得,背誦或者記憶確實對我們的寫作提高幫助非常大。但是要提高寫作,僅僅會背單詞是不夠的,我們一定要從單詞的積累跨越到語塊的積累。

什麼是語塊呢?在語言學上,語塊可以理解成能夠一起去記憶或者處理的單詞組合。從這個意義上看,單詞如果是碎片,語塊則可以幫助我們將碎片整理在一起。語塊可以有不同的表現形式:比如說常見的單詞搭配、句型、諺語等等。這些東西積累得越多,我們在寫作過程就會發揮的越得心應手。原因也很簡單:因爲單詞是零散的、單獨的,但是使用單詞必須要有具體的語境,而語塊恰恰給我們提供了這樣一個環境。我們下面將具體介紹單詞搭配、句型和諺語這三種常見的語塊。

單詞搭配

舉例來說,我們看一個單詞“abandon”。這個單詞相信大家都背過,是放棄的意思。但是到底怎麼才能把這個單詞用好?什麼情況去用這個單詞呢?如果我們去查詞典,這裏以朗文字典爲例,我們就知道,abandon有遺棄; 放棄的意思。但這遠遠不夠。當abandon 表示遺棄的時候,常見的搭配是abandon a baby;所以棄嬰是abandoned baby。同理,abandon 作爲放棄是大家最常見的意思,但是什麼時候用放棄這個意思呢。如果我們去看單詞的搭配,我們就知道,abandon 有兩個層面的意思,第一是具象的層面:如abandon a car/abandon a city。這裏的意思就可以用leave 代替。而另一是抽象的層面。如abandon their attempts/ideas/hopes 等等,這次層面就相當於give up的含義。最後abandon 還可以跟to 搭配,有沉溺於;不能自拔的意思, 如abandon oneself to grief (沉浸在悲傷) 和abandon oneself to fantasies (沉溺於幻想的意思)。從上述的例子可以看出,要學會一個單詞的使用,最重要的是看它能跟哪些單詞搭配,有沒有固定的短語可以使用。託福寫作中常見的例子還有be preoccupied with (專注於), be occupied with (忙於什麼)等等。

句型

語塊另一層面是句型。如果我們能記住一些句型並熟練使用,也能大大充實我們的寫作。比如說,it is universally acknowledged that …, 對於這些句型,我們需要直接記住,並通過一兩個例句的練習熟練掌握。如It is universally acknowledged that education plays an significant role in our life。這些句型的熟練掌握能夠幫助我們在寫作的時候有話能講而且節省寫作時間。這比光記住universally 和 acknowledge 這兩個單詞要實用的多。

諺語

最後語塊是英文裏面膾炙人口的諺語。比如新概念第三冊23冊裏的經典句 “One man’ meat is another men’s poison”(蘿蔔青菜更有所愛)和 另一個諺語“great minds think alike” (英雄所見略同) 。這兩則短語就可以很好地運用下面這道題目中:In order to succeed, it’s better for a person to act the same as others rather than behave differently from others.

所以對於託福寫作來說,要取得高分,是不能僅僅以背單詞和背範文爲導向,更重要的是要積累合適自己水平和熟練掌握的語料。我們該如何去積累這些語塊呢?一方面同學們可以從好的英語雜誌、英文歌曲和電影字幕甚至託福閱讀中摘錄,另一面也可以將範文中好的表達和老師上課講過的短語和句型進行整理,放入自己的語塊庫。一旦形成自己比較穩定和擅長的語塊庫,就不難做到讀書破萬卷,下筆如有神了。

  託福寫作備考之滿分句式彙總

句型1

原文材料:

"The new rules should thus expose polluters to a scissor-style pressure:from above,through the central-planning system,and from below,from the media and organisations such as Mr Ma's."

推薦句型:

_x be exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through…, and from below, from….

推薦理由:

壓力毫無疑問是一個寫作和口語考試中非常常用的一個萬能理由,因爲它可以跟很多東西相關,比如壓力的來源(生活壓力,學習壓力,工作壓力),壓力的影響(身體差,心情不爽),減壓的方式和措施等等,上面的句型就可以用來描寫某一個主體,比如工作的人或者學生,面臨着雙重壓力,工作的人可能來自照顧老人撫養孩子;學生可能來自父母老師以及同伴。

原創例句:

1. A majority of the youths today are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through looking after the ever growing aging population, and from below, from the soaring costs of raising children.

2. A multitude of teenagers at present are exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through their parents with ever-higher expectations, and from below, from their peers most of whom try their best to outdo each other.

學以致用:

1. People care more about public recognition than about money.

根據上面的例句,這個題目我們可以選擇不同意,那些苦逼的剛上班沒幾年的年輕人,怎麼可能更在乎名而不是錢呢?他們壓力多大啊,當然需要錢了啊;

2. Younger school children should be required to study music and art in addition to language, science, and mathematics.

同樣,這個題目我們也可以選擇不同意的立場,孩子們本來就壓力特別大,父母期望高,同伴都一個比一個牛逼,學校裏面的課程和輔導課都上不完呢,怎麼可能有時間搞別的呢。這不是坑爹嗎?

句型2

原文材料:

While, arguably, this “finding” is as trivial as an umbrella that turns blue when it’s going to rain, there is nothing trivial about collecting personal data, as innocuous as that data may seem.

推薦句型(變體):

s/sounds as adj. as can be, there is nothing more adj. than...

推薦理由:

我們在獨立寫作中經常用到對比的寫法。這個句型可用在具有對比意味的語境中,前半句當作讓步,“儘管對比中的一個因素看起來已經很…”, 後半句轉折說“但是另一個因素更…”.

原創例句:

1. While environmental protection seems as pressing as can be, there is nothing more pressing than feeding the growing population in disadvantaged countries where the original eco-system is well preserved.

2. While a secure job seems as tempting as can be, there is no job more tempting than a risky and well-paid one for the new generation who are mostly avid challenge hunters.

3. While playing sports with a couple of friends sounds as relaxing as can be, there is nothing more relaxing than a good book or an old movie for those manual laborers who are wearied out with strenuous physical work every day.

學以致用:

1. Feeding the world’s growing population is more important than protecting environment.

這道題中如果我們持同意的意見,就可以用到第一個例句。儘管到處都在宣揚保護環境的重要,但是並非世界各地的環境都破壞了啊,比如美麗的非洲大草原原始生態環境保持完好,但是一些邊緣小國民不聊生,人民瘦的皮包骨,你說feed population重要還是保護環境重要呢?

2. It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a risky one with a high salary.

根據第二個例句,我們這道題可以不同意。雖然鐵飯碗聽起來挺誘人的,但新一代的年輕人個個都很傲嬌,熱衷追尋挑戰,高薪高風險的工作相比之下更合他們的口味。

3. To read a book or to watch a movie is a better way to relax than to do some physical exercises.

第三個例句回答的就是這道題,確實約三五好友做做運動聽起來不賴,但是對於那些每天做繁重體力勞動的工人來說,額外的運動會加重他們的身體負擔,還是一本好書或者一部老電影更能幫他們放鬆。

句型3

原文材料:

It takes very little imagination to foresee how the kitchen mood wall could lead to advertisements for antidepressants that follow you around the takes even less imagination to foresee how information about your comings and goings obtained from the Google Latitude Doorbell could be used in a court of law.

推薦句型:

It takes very little imagination to … takes even less imagination to ...

推薦理由:

這個句型看起來很簡單,但我們一般不會想到先用little表示極少,再用less表示比little還少。兩個句子排列工整,可以用在說理部分,用來描述一個不言自明、顯而易見的情況

原創例句:

1. It takes very little imagination to foresee how fast competition in the adulthood would turn vicious; it takes even less imagination to foresee in what way vicious competition would influence friendships.

2. It takes little imagination to visualize what people would be like if they do not have access to education. It takes even less imagination to visualize what a country would be like if its people are, through no fault of their own, ignorant.

3. It takes little imagination to foresee that people’s awareness will soon be enhanced. It takes even less imagination to foresee that governments of different countries will take joint efforts and sponsor more scientific researches against the exacerbating environment.

學以致用:

1. Competition between friends always has negative influence on their friendship.

這道題簡直不能同意更多,成年朋友之間一有競爭就容易友盡。用例句的話說就是,不難想象成年人之間的競爭很快就會升級成撕逼大戰,更不難猜競爭變味後的朋友還能不能好好玩耍。

2. Improving schools is the most important factor for the successful development of a country.

古話說得好,教育是國之根本,沒文化真可怕。一個人沒受過教育會是啥樣,一個國家的人都沒文化這個國家又會是啥樣,敢想嗎?所以這道題就同意唄,改善學校是國家成功發展的最重要因素。

3. The most important problems that affect our society can be solved within our lifetime.

現在人類最煩心的事是什麼?看看帝都人民發明的APEC blue就知道了,環境啊。那環境問題能不能在我們有生之年解決呢?當然了,都已經水深火熱成這樣了,人民的環保意識肯定會提高啊,過年過節放鞭炮的都少了;基層人民都行動了,各國政府還好意思圍觀麼,當然得行動起來了。當年的倫敦霧霾一世紀就緩過來了,我們現在科技這麼發達,心情這麼迫切,很有可能環境問題幾十年就解決了。所以這道題答yes就行了。

句型4

原文材料:

Meanwhile, cars themselves are becoming computers on wheels, with operating system updates coming wirelessly over the air.

推薦句型:

with+n./pron.+doing

推薦理由:

兩個主語發出兩種動作,這兩種動作又幾乎同時發生,你會怎麼寫?打賭80%的同學都是The economy is developing fast, but the environment is deteriorating. 爲了增強句式變化,我們可以使用一個with的複合結構,把其中一個主語和動作塞進複合結構裏。

原創例句:

1. Urban residents find it more difficult to raise children than five decades ago, with living cost and tuition hitting all time high.

2. Fresh grads in first-tier cities nowadays find themselves more pressured than ever before, with competition in the job market growing increasingly stiff.

3. This is due to the fact that students can retrieve information and obtain knowledge from various sources other than teachers, with new media advancing continuously these years.

學以致用:

1. It is easier for parents to raise children than 50 years ago.

過去人們一直抱怨計劃生育政策,但是開放二胎之後卻沒多少人生。生孩子就那麼分分鐘的事兒,爲啥沒人生呢?不好養唄。奶粉貴不貴,上學貴不貴,所以就像第一個例句說的,隨着生活和教育成本再創新高,城市居民發現撫養孩子比五十年前難多了。

2. The rules the whole society expects young people to follow are too strict.

近來找過工作的年輕人肯定都感受到了這個社會森森的惡意,隨便一家很水的公司招聘都要3、5年的工作經驗,這麼苛刻的規則還讓不讓我們新畢業的菜鳥玩兒了?所以這一題我們舉雙手雙腳贊成,如例句二所說,工作市場競爭的激烈指數一路飆升,讓一線城市的小鮮肉們感受到了史無前例的壓力。

3. Teachers today are less appreciated and valued than in the past.

身爲老師我只能爲這題含淚點贊,隨着新媒體的發展,學生們翅膀硬了,有度娘有谷歌,哪裏不會點哪裏,誰還在乎老師呢。

句型5

原文材料:

Recent revelations from the journalist Glenn Greenwald put the number of Americans under government surveillance at a colossal 1.2 million people.

推薦句型:

Recent ... from…put the number of…at ...

推薦理由:

數據論證憑藉自身的通(wu)用(lai)深受男女老少歡迎,可以說是居家旅行託福雅思之必備神器。這個句式用在數據論證中,介紹某一來源中的一個具體數字再裝逼不過了。

原創例句:

1. A recent survey jointly conducted by and National Analysis has put the number of users of cab-hailing apps at a colossal 150 million, with only 1.8% aged over 50.

2. A recent report issued by the government has put the number of Chinese cities blanketed by smog at an astonishing 61.

3. A recent poll conducted by Shanghai University has put the number of respondents who want to live in a cheap place at a whopping 350, 000, approximately 80% of whom are under the age of 30.

學以致用:

1. Technologies designed to make our lives easier actually make it more complicated.

科技並不是公平的,對什麼都能迅速上手的年輕人來說,科技着實使生活變得簡單。但是對於腦筋不夠靈活視力也逐年下降的老年人來說,科技反而會使他們的生活變複雜。比如騰訊和國家分析局做的一個調查顯示打車軟件的用戶已經高達1.5億,但這其中只有1.8%的用戶年紀超過50歲(此調查純屬虛構如有雷同純屬巧合)。大爺大媽們不會用軟件,路上的車都被年輕人用打車軟件預定了,你說科技是不是使老年人的生活更復雜了?

2. Environmental problems are too complex, and individuals cannot handle them.

環境問題一直是近年來各種媒體上的buzzword,那爲了渲染環境問題嚴重,我們可以一句話證明環境沒救了。比如第二個例句說,近來一箇中國政府報告稱被霧霾籠罩的中國城市數目已經達到駭人的61個。後面再解釋說pm2.5多高,污染程度之深, 來證明個人行爲是無法解決這樣的問題的。Nailed it~

3. Which place do you prefer to live in? a. a place that is not expensive. b. a place that is close to relatives c. a place with a lot of shops and restaurants around

這道三選一問題非常接地氣,問人們想住什麼樣的地方。那麼上海大學的民調又可以出場了,多達350,000位受訪者表示願意住在便宜的地方,其中百分之八十左右是30歲以下的窮屌絲,那這道題的答案顯然就是年輕人住便宜點,哪怕上下班山水迢迢。

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原文材料:

As human behavior is tracked and merchandized on a massive scale, the Internet of Things creates the perfect conditions to bolster and expand the surveillance state.

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推薦理由:

在開頭lead-in的部分,很多同學爲了避免唐突尷尬會說“隨着時代發展社會進步人民生活水平提高”等等廢話,那麼上面這個句型可以讓我們的cliche變得稍稍不那麼low。

原創例句:

1. As information technology continues to progress, social network sites create perfect conditions for malicious hackers to access privacy that we have no intention to reveal to strangers.

2. As people’s philosophy of education evolves, wealthy parents now create perfect conditions for their children to learn both liberal arts and science, so that they can build a well-rounded personality from an early age.

3. As technologies develop rapidly, instant communication tools create perfect conditions for young people to keep in touch with their old friends, no matter how far they are apart from each other.

學以致用:

1. Some people record experience by sharing picture or other information on social network sites, while others don’t like to share. Which do you prefer?

這道題在大規模好萊塢女星豔照泄漏之後出顯得特別與時俱進。在社交網絡上,你是一個悶騷潛水員,還是一個愛秀直播逼呢?如果選擇前者,我們在引入話題時就可以用上例句一,隨着信息技術不斷進步,社交網站給腹黑的黑客們提供了完美的條件去窺探我們無意向陌生人透露的隱私,所以我們最好還是不作不死。

2. Young school children should be required to learn art and music in addition to science, math, history and language.

隨着教育觀念的一步步革新,家長們不再是拿着雞毛撣子逼孩子學習的角色了,他們也意識到了素質教育的重要。但是主課之外的音樂美術等等也不是誰都學得起的,於是家底厚實的爹們爲他們的公子千金創造了完美的條件來學習人文和科學知識,這樣就可以早早培養孩子們健全的人格。

3. Moving to a new town or country is not a good thing because people will lose their friends.

搬去新的國家或者城市是不好的,因爲會跟朋友失聯?四處浪的年輕人肯定覺得這是BS,現在溝通這麼方便,怎麼會失去朋友呢?所以,如例句三所說,隨着科技迅速發展,即時通訊工具給年輕人與舊友交流創造了完美的平臺,無論他們相隔多遠。所謂但願人長久,千里聊QQ。