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專四如何寫出漂亮的結尾

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作文模板的漂亮結尾!一個好的結尾自然也會爲作文帶來很高的分數,因此同學們在複習的過程中,不要僅僅側重於一個漂亮的開頭,也要適當的來關注我們作文的結尾,這樣才能夠讓我們的大作文拿到高分!

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1.  “爛招”解救危難

在巨大的時間壓力下,很可能你沒有來得及寫末段,請記住這個“爛招”:寫下

In conclusion, I personally believe that…, 在省略號部分抄上原題的觀點。

如主題句表達:Some peoplethink that economic progress is the most important way to measure a country'ssuccess. Other people think other factors are also important. Discuss bothviews and give your own opinions.

可在剩下最後一分鐘時寫下:In  conclusion,  personally, I  believe  that  economic

progress is not the most important way to measure a country’s success, and other     facts must be taken into consideration.

這個末段給人一種強烈的“扣題”感,理由很明顯,緊緊地扣住題目啦!

    

2.  高招體現縝密思維

“爛招”其實在某種程度上不賴。但是對於追求真正寫作能力的同學,可以做到有始纔有終,善始才能善終!映射到作文上,這句話的意思是:寫好了首段和主體段,才能夠寫出“圓滿”的末段。大部分的考生複習到這個階段都已經達到一種共識:在作文的首段給出自己對話題的立場(take a clear position),這其實就是全文的主題思想 thesis statement。文章剩餘部分的使命就是論證主題思想的合理性,使用解釋,舉例,對比等方式論證。對於這個使命,末段的貢獻在哪裏呢?

末段不能再引入新的論據,而是通過總結性質再次提出自己的立場,告知讀者使命已經完成。舉例。

Some people think that parentsshould teach children how to be a good member  of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learnthis. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

材料作文首段提出了自己的立場“Therefore, this can not be the responsibility

of the parent alone”這個 thesis經過主體段的辯證論證之後,末段可以呼應爲“and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to takeresponsibility for helping  the youngergeneration to become active and able member of that society.”

“把孩子教程積極向上,有能力有理想的公民不是家長和老師可以互相推諉的責任,而是整個社會的不可推卸的責任”,這比首段的立場要深刻很多。

圓滿的末段做到“餘音繞樑”  末段迴響主體段要點   

(The concluding paragraph echoes the keyarguments in the body paragraphs)

“餘音繞樑”對於問題解決型的文章尤爲重要。以範文爲例:

Increasing the price of petrol is the best wayto solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree ordisagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

本題有兩問,可先在首段先回答了第一問“Solving this problem is likely to

needmore than a simple rise in the price of petrol.” 這一立場在第二段中得到充分的論證,從而也有了回答第二個問題的基礎——給出其他能夠解決交通問題的方案。在文中,考官提出“develop cleaner fuels”和 “improve public transport”這兩個方案。

末段不能再提出新的方案,“It isa good idea to recapitulate what you said in order  to suggest  to  your reader  that  you have accomplished  what  you set  out to

accomplish.”。 可在結尾闡述自己的觀點:“I think  the  long term  traffic  and

pollution reductions would depend oneducating the  public to use publictransport     more, and on governmentsusing public money to construct and run efficient systems” 在末段中注意“首尾呼應”——“the  reduction depend  on  …”