初中英語書面表達與改錯
作文改錯很容易混淆，總覺得哪個都對，其實不是哦。下面是本站小編給大家整理的一些初中英語書面表達與改錯，供大家參閱!
書面表達與改錯篇1：
I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________
such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________
songs. My most favorite subject is English. I became3.________
interested in it when I was very you.g. My dream is 4.________
to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________
and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________
able to improving the friendship between China and7.________
the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________
And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________
harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens!10.________
答案與解析：
y→hobbies many後接複數名詞，下文such as後列舉的內容也是提示。
o前加the play the piano表示“彈鋼琴”，是固定搭配。西洋樂器類名詞前常用定冠詞the。
3.去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜愛的”，因此原句語義重複。
4.√
→So 前後邏輯上是因果而不是轉折關係。
→western 依據語境這裏表示“西方文化”，應用形容詞western作定語。
oving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能夠做某事”。
d→hope 這裏表示說話人現在的願望，故應用一般現在時。
9.去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其後不能接從句。
→what no matter what happens無論發生什麼，what充當從句的主語。
書面表達與改錯篇2：
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________
and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________
will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________
have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________
as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________
think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________
we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________
and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________
medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________
some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________
答案與解析：
→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以謂語動詞用複數形式。
→and 此處表示的是順承關係，而不是轉折關係。
3.刪去第二個the 一般情況下，表示國家的單個詞語前不加冠詞。
d→cost 本句的主語不是人，而是it，所以用cost。
→have 短文全篇敘述的都是現在和將來的情況。
→that/which或刪去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定語從句，修飾先行詞the car，關係代詞在從句中作賓語，可以省略。
→us 根據文章的開頭部分可知這裏指的是作者本人和作者的父親，因此應用us。
ibly→possible possible表示“儘可能……”。
ent前加to 此處是不定式短語作目的狀語。
10.√
書面表達與改錯篇3：
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案與解析：
1.去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“畢業”。
h→months month是可數名詞，several暗示應用複數形式。
rested後加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“對……感興趣”。
→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短語作定語，修飾a man表示“自稱Mr. Smith”的男子。
→did 根據邏輯可知這裏表示畢業前的情況，故用一般過去時。do well in“幹得好”。
6.√
en→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
→would 這裏應考慮主從句時態的呼應，故用過去將來時。
rised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人驚訝的是”。
後加was what he said是主語從句，“他的話是令人失望的”。句子缺少系動詞。
