高分託福寫作技巧之段落展開
邏輯清晰，結構緊湊的段落無疑是託福寫作的加分項之一，爲了幫助大家備考託福寫作，下面小編給大家帶來 高分託福寫作技巧之段落展開，來學習一下吧!
高分託福寫作技巧之段落展開
新託福作文如果想得高分，個人覺得字數是越多越好，如果可以擴充到450字，那麼拿高分的機會就會大一點。
本人剛接觸作文的時候，覺得最大的問題就是題目的設置都是些不言自明的或者淺顯的不知道說什麼的東西。比如建工廠好不好或者父母是不是最好的老師，儘管有論點，但是就是覺得寫不長，覺得沒法展開。
具體點的例子，比如是從書本中獲得知識好還是從實踐中獲得知識好，有一段想說從書本中獲得知識好，因爲書一讀就知道很多，多爽啊;實踐的話要好久才能懂得一個道理，不efficient。論點是有了，怎麼把它展開成150-200字左右的一段呢?
如果可以遵循以下步驟就會方便展開：闡述正面特徵，展開論述，引用例子或數據，如果沒有的不良後果。
第一句：topic sentence:書本上獲得的知識更全面，含量更大
第二句：正面闡述subject特徵：書是對於現象事實等的文字記錄，儘管事實複雜或者事實的獲得用了很久，但是結論可以用很簡單的文字獲得。所以，比起經驗，書本可以帶給人更多的知識。(本句是對書的特點的正面闡述，點名了書本知識的濃縮性)
從這裏，邏輯展開：從書本→濃縮了豐富的知識變成了書本→其性質是把各種經驗做整理和記錄→濃縮了豐富的知識。也就是說，說理部分是在簡單的邏輯(工廠→污染)中間加上一環(工廠→運營難免排放廢水廢料廢氣→污染)。這樣看似簡單，可是這樣中間的一環卻是必須的，否則你說工廠會導致污染，判卷人會覺得：爲什麼工廠就會導致污染呢?邏輯跳躍太大了，託福作爲就是給一個6歲小孩講道理，所以要像照顧小孩子一樣對待閱卷人，邏輯展開一定要一步一步的來。
其實，到這裏說理部分就結束了，展現了你的思考問題的邏輯結構。後面的“如果沒有”，“引用例子，數據”之類的都是增加文采，擴充文字的，依據時間長短，自己隨便挑兩到三樣加上去即可。
1 引用例子：the example of__ matches my point of view perfectly; To look for better illustration, one can look no further than___; one case in point involves___, 自己編一個例子即可，可以是真的，也可以是編的，甚至是自己生活中的。引用例子的時候參考一下上面的句型，別總用for example 和such as
2 引用“權威”調查和數據。A recent survey, revealing that___ can also serve to demonstrate this point; A research, in which__ were investigated, suggests that____. 調查和數據都是自己編的，別太離譜就行了。
3 如果沒有： seldom can we imagine the situation without___; hundreds of years ago, when there was no__, people_(生活多麼麻煩和困難)__
下面是一個具體例子：
第一句Knowledge obtained from books is more diverse and has larger quantity. (論點)
第二句正面闡述對象特徵Books are written form of documentation of facts and phenomenon, which, although obtained through numerous efforts, can be put down in only a few simple words. Therefore, compared to practicing,比較兼插入 reading books can bring people numerous amounts of knowledge in a more convenient and efficient way.
後面的隨便撿兩樣。如果沒有Hardly can we imagine the situation without those concise expressions of ideas. Without the benefits of books, the brilliant ideas of predecessors will be lost due to the lack of recording; students will have no material to go over when they are faced with examinations; all the essence and beauty of poems and novels will never be appreciated by the descendents.(排比，是一個亮點，如果考場想不起來可以不寫的)
引用例子More specifically, take the biological class as an example. If the teacher wants his students to grasp Mendel’s law of inheritance, instead of guiding the students to grow some pea, he will open up the textbook and tell the students what the result of the experiment that had been conducted is and what law Mendel has found.
引用數據Besides, investigation showing that books account for 90 percent of the sources provided for students to obtain knowledge can also support my side.
大家也許可以看出來，後面三個部分即使扔掉一部分段落還是基本完整的，實際上本人在考試的時候，剛開始沒有把三種都用上，是寫完作文還有時間纔再把個別段落加個數據調查，或者再加一句如果沒有的。
另外補充一點：寫完例子的時候最好要再收尾一下，比如說，from the example, we can see that by reading books, we can obtain the most knowledge within a short time 之類的。這樣論述就更完整了，邏輯在老外作文裏是很重要的，骨頭長正了肉才能長好，人才能漂亮。
託福寫作備考：是否需要練習限時寫作
誤區一：託福寫作字數越多越好。
當我們單純的看到“字數越多越好”的時候，可以說這是有一定的道理的，因爲如果你的字數越多，那麼就越能更好的闡明自己的觀點，但是很多考友特別喜歡將這種思路發揮到極致。要知道其實託福作文如果能達到350字-450字就已經很好了，只要達到這個範圍內基本上就不會對你的分數產生任何負面的影響了。
誤區二：剛開始寫作文，就要限定時間。
當我們剛剛開始準備作文的時候，我們現在國內的很多考友們，有可能在真正準備新托福考試的作文之前有可能從來都沒有寫過幾篇作文，因此當面的托福考試這麼多字數的要求的時候，常常會覺得自己無所適從。因此很多人，在準備不充分的情況下就限定自己一定要在規定的30分鐘時間之內，完成託福作文。
殊不知，任何一個考試都是要循序漸進的，作文也是如此。當我們剛開始準備作文的時候，首先要追求的是成功率，也就是完成度，而不是時間。換句話說，在準備託福以及sat作文的前期，首先要做的，是完成作文，也就是不管花多少時間，一定要讓自己的作文達到300字以上，而且如果自己準備考試的時間比較充分的話，最好剛開始的3-5篇作文都是不給自己限定時間，首先追求的是能把作文寫完，然後當我們感覺有話可說的時候，在提升自己的新託福寫作速度，換句話說也就是限定自己在30分鐘之內完成自己的獨立作文。
誤區三：不注重語法的準確。
現在的很多考友是生活在用英語的環境之中的，比如說現在有很多考友是在美國或者英國上高中的，當然也有很多考友是在國內純英語的國際學校求學，這些環境往往是全英文的環境，本來一個全英文的環境是十分有助於英語水平的提升的，但是實際上，純英語的環境對於英語的語法要求並不嚴格。
換句話說，有可能一句話雖然有語病，但是由於對方能聽懂，因此他也沒有糾正你，那麼你也默認這裏是沒有問題的。因此我們會看到很多英語環境之內的考生，往往在作文的部分折戟沉沙鐵未銷，就是因爲這個關鍵性的語法的問題。因此，當我們在準備作文部分以及口語部分這些主觀題的時候，要注意在新託福寫作考試之前一定要好好打磨一下自己的語法，否則後患無窮!
託福寫作總分結構分析
語法得分(Grammar)
ETS工作人員可以事前通過電腦程序輸入寫作中不同難度的語法現象及常犯的語法錯誤事例，因而對於考生的任何一篇文章電腦可以自動識別該習作是否犯了類似的語法錯誤及其是否使用了較爲高級的語法現象。具體來講，語法能力考查涵蓋以下幾點：動詞使用是否錯誤、代詞指代是否不明、物主代詞是否使用正確、主謂是否一致、是否存在不完整句、是否存在粘連句等。毋庸置疑，電腦對於如上語法的判斷要比人爲操作更爲嚴謹、準確。因爲寫作是依賴鍵盤操作，故需要對句子完整性和粘連現象進行評定。但依據筆者的經驗，很多考生在短短30分鐘是難以達到“語法完美”的程度的，但是他們的作文得分並不低。由此可見，雖然E- raters關注寫作的語法得分，但是其重要性位階是低於ETS 的評分原則的。
內容表達載體得分(usage score)
該考查點主要關注學生能否用“較爲正式的文體”來闡述自己的觀點以及單詞本身是否使用恰當。該評價並不關注內容是否全面、論證是否有效，而僅僅關注表達文章信息的載體語言是否滿足以下幾點：表達中冠詞是否出現錯誤、是否使用不準確的詞彙、單詞使用形式錯誤(排除拼寫)、比較信息表達錯誤、表達信息偏向口語或者不正式。這些信息點的測試也是通過ETS官方人員事先輸入相應程序來實現的。通過電腦評價，這些缺憾更容易被識別，因爲個人的主觀見解在評分中是容易出現偏差的。但是這裏需要提醒一點：我們不能把這些考點的重要性過於誇大，過於苛求我們的學生在託福作文考試中做到正式文體加正式的表達。根據趙質明校長的教學經驗，雖然很多學生在託福作文中使用了諸如 “let me take an example of myself”， “okay, that’s very amusing”之類非正式的語言，但是其習作依舊有可能獲得滿分的成績。
託福寫作範文：政客最重要的品質是良好的溝通技巧
寫作題目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important quality for a politician or leader to have is good communication skills. 政客最重要的性格特徵就是擁有良好的溝通技巧，是否認同?
寫作範文
Politicians and leaders have many responsibilities. As representatives of government or social organizations, they play the delicate role of communicating with the people they represent. They also are responsible for, through discussions, finding a consensus among other leaders in order to write laws and policies. Finally, leaders have the important job of serving as a spokesperson, promoting government or association programs and rallying people’s support behind important issues. Communication skills are essential for a leader to successfully complete these tasks.
The support of the people is essential in most governments in the world. To get the support of the people, a political leader must gain their trust and support on many issues. People expect their political representatives to help fix problems in the community and society, but sometimes politicians have to make unpopular decisions for the overall good. For example taxes. Taxes are never popular, but they are necessary to support governments and maintain order. A political leader that can persuade the people to support these unpopular but necessary issues will have a more successful government than a political leader who is constantly at odds with the people. A political leader that is not good at speaking could very easily offend the people. Good command of rhetoric and debating skills determines the success of any politician.
In addition, leaders have to effectively communicate with each other. Consensus is the very foundation of successful political governments and organizations in general. Leaders, politician in particular, often differ in opinion on the best way to address an issue, like the annual budget. Being able to express clearly their individual approaches to the budget plan is important to arriving at a consensus. If a leader has an amazing budget plan, but cannot explain it clearly, she will not be able to persuade others to support her plan. A politician or leader who has no communication skills will not successfully implement his or her policies.
Leaders, whether they are politicians or social reformers, have the responsibility of rallying and maintaining support for these policies and movements. Oratory skills are vital to achieving this goal. Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. was the face and voice of the Civil Rights Movement. Many of his ideas, like non-violent civil disobedience, helped define the Civil Rights Movement. But Dr. King would have been just another protester marching for civil rights if it were not for his amazing communication skills. Through his eloquent speeches, his message for equality caused millions to join the cause. Language, if used skillfully, is a powerful weapon for leaders.
A politician that cannot speak to his or her people will not succeed. Leaders are those who can make plans and carry them out. Speech making and general communication skills are vital to maintaining a leadership position.
