實例講解託福獨立寫作讓步段的寫作技巧

託福獨立寫作中有些技巧可以幫助我們託福作文獲得高分大家知道是什麼嗎?這其中可能就是讓步段，那麼讓步段能爲你的作文起到什麼效果呢?這裏小編帶大家一起學習一下讓步段的寫法。

實例講解託福獨立寫作讓步段的寫作方法

託福獨立寫作中，一個好的讓步段會讓文章的邏輯關係更嚴密，論證更豐富，更符合學術文章的要求。然而，很多考生嘗試着寫讓步段，卻也有湊字數的目的，無法發揮讓步段的最佳威力。

到底怎樣寫出好的讓步段?寫還是不寫?這是個問題很多同學有疑問，在一篇完整的獨立作文中，讓步段是不是一定要寫呢?可不可以不寫呢?讓步段不是必須要寫的，考生們可以在作文裏只提出支持自己觀點的兩至三個正面的理由，這樣也可以得出最後的結論。比如說是否同意新的科技產品發佈，過段時間購買比馬上購買要好，我們完全可以只提出過段時間購買的兩個正面理由：

一. 價格會更便宜;

二. 產品的性能會更優化，這樣整篇作文的論點還是明確的。

但是這篇文章當然也可以加上讓步段，過段時間再買的壞處，或是馬上購買的好處。這樣會顯得這篇文章論證的邏輯更加嚴密和全面，我們確實是進行了優劣對比後，才得出自己的觀點。

尤其要注意的是，如果作文題目本身的觀點的反面並不能夠被忽略，那麼建議讓步段是一定要寫的，這樣顯得我們得出自己的觀點纔不牽強。

比如作文題目Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.。我們可以寫正面的兩個觀點，即玩電腦遊戲的兩個好處，但是我們同樣不能忽略玩電腦遊戲的壞處，所以就要寫讓步段了，不然觀點就會顯得過於偏激。

怎麼寫讓步段?這又是個問題重中之重: 讓一小步，進一大步!

讓步段的最重要目的是對讓步內容地不斷削弱，以退爲進，先提出壞處，然後再否定它。但是要記住的是讓步段與支持段結構一致，也是有主題句，然後要對主題句進行展開解釋。　　所以常見的套路是：主題句(不可否認A也有壞處)+解釋(進一步解釋說明壞處是什麼)+讓步(但是呢，這些壞處可以被解決掉，或是不太重要)

1.讓步段主題句寫法讓步段的主題句一般是這樣的：不可否認的是，A可能會有一些壞處。這裏我們儘量語氣要委婉些，下面是一些會用到的詞組表達：——Admittedly / Undoubtedly / There is no denying that / It cannot be denied that　　——May / might / possibly / probably　　——One / one or two / a couple of / minor / several　　——To some extent / to some degree【常見錯誤】很多考生讓步段用although開頭，但是although後面只能跟一個從句，所以後面主題句的內容就沒有辦法展開了。

2. 讓步如何實現讓步段的表述可以參考以下模式：?讓步方的好處比支持方的好處次要，或者支持方的壞處比起好處來次要。However, the advantages of A are more important than those of B.讓步方優點與支持方優點比起來較少，或支持方缺點與優點比起來較少。However, the advantages of A are far more than those / that of ver, the advantages of A outnumber those / that of B.對方的好處，我方也可以有辦法得到;我方的壞處可以有辦法消除。However, the problem can be solved by …　However, the negative influence can be eliminated by …

3. 讓步段範例賞析Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.

主題句: Admittedly, playing computer games does harbor several drawbacks.

解釋： Some children are addicted to playing computergames and ignore their studies, thereby suffering from poor academic performance. Also, over exposure to computer games with high concentration will sooner or later cause the impairment of their eyesight.

讓步:However, most children are able to control themselves to play games in moderation. Also, their parents can intervene and supervise as well. Specifically, they could set strict rules on how much time their children could play games everyday and on what conditions they could do so, therefore it is completely unnecessary to forbid them to play computer games.

　　託福綜合寫作的幾種開頭方法

託福綜合寫作開頭方法一、比較新穎、有創意的開頭

“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker， not to government or to business.

As a saying goes， “God helps those help themselves”， which is true in most cases. But as far as the large numbers of laid-off workers caused by the technological and market changes are concerned， I believe the government and the business certainly have an unshakable responsibility to take.

託福綜合寫作開頭方法二、 可以適當的複述一下題目，然後稍作讓步，再表達自己的觀點和立場

“Work greatly influences people’s personal lives—their special interests， their leisure activities， even their appearance way from the work place.”

The speaker claims that our jobs greatly influence our personal interests， recreational activities and even appearance. While I agree that the personal lives of some people are largely determined by their work， in my view it would be a mistake to draw this conclusion generally. In my observation， the extent to which occupation influences personal life depends on the nature of the work， and how central the work is to one’s sense of self.

“We shape our buildings and afterwards our buildings shape us.”

I believe this statement should be interpreted broadly—to mean that we are influenced by the exterior shape of buildings， as well as by the arrangement of multiple buildings and by a building’s various architectural and aesthetic elements. While I doubt that buildings determine our character or basic personality traits， I agree that they can greatly influence our attitudes， moods， and even life styles.

託福綜合寫作開頭方法三、新託福寫作可以以提問方式開頭，闡述自己的觀點，再表明自己的立場

“As technologies and the demand for certain services change， many workers will lose their jobs. The responsibility for those people to adjust to such change should belong to the individual worker， not to government or to business.”

As technology and changing social needs render more and more jobs obsolete， who is responsible for helping displaced workers adjustWhile individuals have primary responsibility for learning new skills and finding work， both industry and government have some obligation to provide them the means of doing so.

託福綜合寫作開頭方法四、可以先表明自己的立場，再闡述原因

Businesses are as likely as are governments to establish large bureaucracies， but bureaucracy is far more damaging to a business than it is to a government.

Contrary to the statement’s premise， my view is that businesses are less likely than government to establish large bureaucracies， because businesses know that they are more vulnerable than government to damage resulting from bureaucratic inefficiencies. My position is well supported by common sense and by observation.

　　託福寫作一定要簡潔

許多考生在參加託福寫作考試時總喜歡將自己覺得最複雜的句式表現出來，覺得從句用的越多越好，對於這點，專家認爲是不對的，託福寫作一定要簡潔!

所謂“言簡樸實原則”，就是行文不囉嗦，句子應越短越好，如果一個字能說清楚的，就不要用兩個字。

例如：At this point in time，we should pull together for our goal. (現在我們應該爲我們的目標團結一致)這句話中“At this point in time”表示“現在”，我們完全可以用now來代替。

In the majority of cases，he likes to ride bike to the office. (他通常喜歡騎單車到辦公室)。很簡單的一句話，完全可以寫成 He usually likes to ride bike to the office。

平時我們所說的用詞多樣化和地道並不是體現在這些時間副詞或者是完全可以簡化的囉嗦句型上，而是指實用性極強的詞如動詞和形容詞，比如：

Original：Solving trivial problems in the dorm will add your social experience and help you to understand other people‘s feelings and learn to be kind。

Revised： Solving trivial problems in the dorm will enrich your social experience and help you to understand other people’s feelings and learn to be considerate。

add，kind 表達的含義都比較寬泛。 add可以指數量上的增加，也可以指程度的加強，對於“豐富經驗、增加知識”這個意思，用enrich會使表達更準確。 kind 從字面意義上講是“好的、善良的”，用kind來形容人無法具體地表現出一個人的性格特徵到底怎樣，原句中是想表達“考慮周到、體貼入微”的特點，要準確表達這個含義應選擇considerate。

另外，我們常見的一些累贅用詞表現在託福寫作中句意的理解，比如：He has had many years of (actual) experience in business。(他有多年經商的經驗)actual是多餘的，因爲experience已經有actual的意味了。

We assembled(together) all the parts for our radio. (我們裝好收音機的零件)assemble本身就有together的意思，因此together是多餘的。“平等相處原則”的意思是行文不出現明顯的帶歧視或偏見的字眼，包括男女性別，也要避免區別，以示“平等”。例如：

Many businessmen(businesswomen) feel their jobs are very stressful. (許多商人覺得工作壓力很大) 這句話寫 businessmen或是businesswomen都是不妥當的，可以改爲 business people或 business executives或business managers就可以包括男女了。

當然，一些帶有種族偏見的字眼，甚至有侮辱的味道(insulting words 或 slur)，也要儘量避免使用，以免鬧出麻煩。例如：

對黑人不要用 Negro，更不能用Nigger (用 Black 還可以)，禮貌的說法 是Afro-American 或African-American;對白人不要用 Honky (這是黑人罵白人的用字)，正確用法是 Caucasian，或 white people;對猶太人不要用 Hymies，應該叫Jewish 或 Jewishpeople;對越南人不要用 Gook，要用 Vietnamese;至於墨西哥人、西班牙人及中、南美洲人，包括 Puerto Rico，正確的用法多是Hispanics 或 Latins，不過據說西班牙人爲了維護自己的文化，倒喜歡別人稱爲 Spaniard。

　　託福獨立寫作範文：現在我們吃的食物比過去要健康

託福寫作題目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.(我們現在吃的食物比過去更健康。)

託福寫作範文：

Back in the days, the world suffered from instances of food-related issues such as shortage, sanitation, and nutritional content. Today, with the numerous advances in related fields of technology, most if not all, of these problems are just a memory of the past. Many claim, in particular, that the foods we consume today are of a much higher quality, thereby making them healthier to eat. But is this certainly the case? I don’t think so.

The last time I checked, there were lots of fast food chains sprawling in our cities and even in some suburban areas. In these places are common sights of obese children and other unhealthy-looking consumers. It does not stop here. The situation gets worse. Remember the time that the price of staple food like rice was sky-high because of limited supply? Well, that’s not the case now. However, there were news reports showing that most of these food supplies, though plentiful, lack the necessary nutritional content. Certain varieties were even proven to be harmful instead. Does the term Genetically Modified Organisms (GMO) ring a bell?聽起來熟悉嗎 In spite of our efforts to produce agricultural products with higher yield, the main concern seems to be this. Are we really eating healthier food now?

Food fuels us.食物給我們力量(加油fuel) Depending on the quality of food we eat, our resistance to sickness, fatigue, and overall wellbeing is determined. Then how come most people now easily get sick or die early? Yes, there are other factors to consider like air pollution and the likes. However, food forms the large proportion of our requirements for survival and daily accomplishment of our activities.

This being said, I firmly conclude that the foods we eat today are not as healthy compared to those in the past. Despite the advances of modern technology, certain by-products are inevitable. Thus, it is up to us to effectively filter what goes into our mouths lest以免 we suffer from unhealthy foods’ effects.

實例講解託福獨立寫作讓步段的寫作方法