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雅思寫作虛擬語氣如何使用

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雅思寫作中,正確的使用多樣化的句式有利於寫作獲取高分。在這些句式中,虛擬語氣的使用是個具有挑戰性的語法點,熟練使用虛擬語氣可以使作文句式呈現層次性。下面小編爲大家彙總了虛擬語氣的使用方法。

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  雅思寫作語法 虛擬語氣如何使用

sb had done sth(壞事), sb would never have done sth(好事).

如果某人過去做了某事(壞事),那麼他永遠不可能做某事

If Hugh Miller, after toiling all day in quarry (採石場), had devoted his evenings to rest and recreation, he would never have become a famous geologist.

would never have done sth(好事1) , never have done sth (好事2), if sb had done sth (壞事)

某人永遠不可能做某事, 永遠不可能做某事, 如果某人過去做了某件壞事

The celebrated mathematician, Edmund Stone, would never have published a mathematical dictionary, never have found the key to science of mathematics, if he had given his spare moments to idleness.

sb done sth(壞事) , sb would never have done sth (好事)

如果某人過去做了某件壞事,而不是去做某件好事,那麼他永遠不可能做某事(好事)

Had the little Scotch lad, Ferguson, allowed the busy brain to go to sleep while he tended sheep on the hillside, instead of calculating the position of the stars by a string of beads, he would never have become a famous astronomer.

對以上幾個虛擬語氣的應用範文

Group discussion Google

If Google had ignored the importance of group discussion, this high-tech company would never have achieved today's stunning success.

(If sb had done sth, he would never have done sth)

Google, a once obscure, ailing / fragile company, would never have achieved today's stunning success, never have conquered so big a market share, if it had ignored the importance of group discussion.

(sb would never have done sth , never have done sth , if sb had done sth)

Had Google , a once small , obscure company , ignored the importance of group discussion ,the hi-tech tycoon would never , never have harvested today's overwhelming success . (壓倒性的成功)

  雅思寫作5.5分魔咒的2大原因及對策

看到網上一篇不錯的雅思名師關於雅思寫作的心得分享,所以跟大家分享一些雅思寫作備考方法,希望幫助烤鴨們走出5.5分魔咒,獲得高分。雅思作文涉及到很多方面,下面是大家問得最多的兩個問題:

1. 關於模板:

雅思寫作能否用模板得高分?學員們的成績說明,模板可保證5或5.5分甚至偶爾6分,但絕對會制約你得6.5分及以上的高分。什麼是模板?大家對下面這種中國人慣用的開頭段方式不會陌生吧: With the development of technology, …plays an important role in our life and arouses heated debate. Some people think…, others think…, I think….這就是最惡俗的制約我們得6分以上分數的開頭段模板。我們對比一下考官在劍8裏寫的滿分開頭段:

題目1:

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

考官範文開頭段

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents only.

顯然,考官沒使用以上我提到的世間最惡俗的寫法。

我們再來看一篇考官在劍5裏面寫的滿分作文的開頭段。

題目2:

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

考官範文開頭段

Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.

縱觀劍3-8上考官給出的滿分範文,考官開頭段的風格永遠都是針對題目中一兩個關鍵詞進行背景拓展,甚至加上自己的一些和題目相關的一些發揮,簡練(一般3句左右)而直逼核心內容,不會說一大堆沒有營養的空話套話。

我對於模板的態度一直很鮮明:一切以實戰需要爲準,不說空話。每個考生的英語功底都是不同的,英語基礎好,有實力原創的同學考前不需要準備固定的套路,而應該把時間用在研究真題和範文上;

而對於確實沒有能力原創太多的同學來說(有些死孩紙完全靠自己實力寫出來的文章真的是令人心碎惆悵),如果不事先準備好邏輯框架,在考試中真就有可能寫不出來,字數不夠或者邏輯顛三倒四。所以模板因人而異,少用精用而不濫用。

2. 關於語言質量:

不僅雅思寫作,所有的寫作都包括在內,都不需要用特別變態特別難特別生僻的詞彙。有的烤鴨有這樣一個誤區,那就是我把單詞寫難了大家都不認識我就能得高分了。

試想一下:我們在雅思寫作中會用到諸如糖尿病腦血栓等這樣的專業大詞嗎?有個孩子以前在雅思作文中寫出神經元的分解,當時我一下就崩潰了。雅思寫作不是考察用詞的難度,而是指用詞的有效性,包括準確度,新穎度,靈活度,所以我們針對這種情況會專門總結一些寫作詞彙。

比如“教育”這個詞,我們都會用education這個詞,但是更高級更易得分的寫法就是這樣寫:schooling---學校教育,parenting---家長教育,這就是更容易得分的寫法了。再比如“心理健康”這個詞,我們都會用mental health,更容易得分的寫法是psychological soundness。在我們的課程中會專門有總結。

還是回到考官範文。縱覽考官範文,他們都不會用難詞大詞怪詞偏詞,但是通過多變的句式和亮點詞組會讓文章變得非常耐看。這種詞彙我們上課會有專門的歸類總結,同學們也可以自己整理。我一直告訴我的學生:背誦借鑑和模仿是提高寫作能力最快和最佳的途徑。建議大家把喜歡的篇章、段落、句式、詞彙摘抄到一個本上,通過不斷翻閱增加記憶。

以上即是小編與大家分享的一篇名師講解破除雅思5.5分魔咒的經驗談,希望能有所幫助,祝早日與雅思分手。