託福寫作語料庫：是否同意競技體育更多地教給人們生活的經驗
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託福寫作語料庫：是否同意競技體育更多地教給人們生活的經驗
【觀點類】
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing sports will teach people important lessons about their lives. 是否同意競技體育教給人們生活的經驗?(2016年4月23日託福寫作題目)
【相關提問】
Playing sports teaches more about life. 競技體育教給人們更多的生活的經驗?
【作家立場】 競技體育是積累人生經驗的重要方式之一，但是，不是唯一的途徑。
【思路拓展】
① 生活經驗還包括包括家務管理能力、 危機處理能力、自我決策能力、自我保護意識等，這些不是競技體育傳播的。例如，我在美國遊學，住在寄宿家庭，就學會如何與周圍的人交往和交流，也鍛鍊了自己的危機處理和自我決策能力、
② 競技體育也是幫助人們積累人生的智慧和經驗。具體而言，不懈追求完美，團隊精神，合作意識，競爭意識等，這些都是競技體育可以傳遞的。
【謀篇佈局】
首段：背景介紹+爭議焦點+作家立場
二段：第一次支持作家立場
三段：第二次支持作家立場
四段：讓步原題觀點的合理性 + 加以反駁
尾段：再次亮明觀點+(總結理由)
【範文賞析】
【首段】背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場
Currently，the awareness of healthier lifestyle enables increasing numbers of people to render more concerns over physical exercises. A great many people are fond of watching various sports competitions or diving into diverse physical activities. However, people have been debating, for many years, whether or not sports events could help people to acquire more knowledge about life. As I see it, sports activities could greatly conduce to enriching one's experience of the world in some aspects, but not in all fields.
【二段】第一次支持作家立場
For a start，not all the life experience could be learnt by sports events, the acquisition of life experience still comes from many other channels. One possible way is through traveling. More precisely, one might be seduced into buying some fake or unqualified goods and thus fall into various consumption traps during the process of participating in the tour organized by travel agency. Nevertheless, a fall into the pit, a gain in your wit，one's self-protection could be strengthened after the unpleasant and bitter experience.
【三段】第二次支持作家立場
This debate reminds me of my own story. Another crucial ability everyone has to learn is the household management ability. Studying abroad is an effective way for those youngsters to develop and cultivate this competence. In the summer vacation of 2015, I stayed in a homestay family in the America, I had to tackle many arduous tasks by myself such as tidying up the room, doing the washing or cooking for myself. Virtually，this sort of experience greatly chastened my adaptability and viability
【四段】讓步原題觀點的合理性
Sure enough，I have to concede that a sea of life experiences, wisdom and philosophy could be acquired via taking part in sports activities. After all, every sports event has its own charm. Take basketball as an example, every individual ranging from spectator to player could benefit from the sportsmanship they show or appreciate such as the teamwork spirit, cooperation and the tenacious spirit. Also, sports help people foster useful group skills such as coordination and strategies. These skills can help them in their later lives and also in their careers. Eventually, the constant endeavors after each failure in sports competition could inspire people to brave new challenges. What I want to rebut that, however, is that there are still wisdom or lesson could not be obtained by sports events.
【尾段】再次亮明觀點
In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that although lessons about life could be acquired by sports competition, it is not the sole channel. Traveling or living alone and many other ways still have a key role to play in imparting life lessons.
託福寫作語料庫：學生們是否應被鼓勵玩遊戲
【觀點類】
Some people believe that video games could inspire young students’ interest and make their study more efficient rather than distracting them and a waste of time, so young students should be allowed to play video games. Do you agree or disagree? 有人認爲遊戲可以激發學生的學習興趣，提高他們學習效率，而不是分散他們的精力和浪費他們的時間，是否認同? (2016年1月23日)
【頭腦風暴】
我們已從互聯網時代進入到無線互聯網時代。手機遊戲成爲年輕人放鬆娛樂的重要方式之一。遊戲是一把雙刃刀，對於玩家而言，在放鬆消遣的同時，也耽誤了寶貴的時間，影響了學習和工作。但是，我們不能因噎廢食。
【作家立場】
儘管遊戲可能給學生們帶來一些弊端，但是，只要可以合理安排和控制學生們的遊戲時間，阻止他們玩遊戲也是沒有必要的。
【思路拓展】
1 鼓勵孩子們玩遊戲的利好
① 豐富多彩的遊戲節目成爲很多學生緩解壓力，釋放情緒的一種有效方式。設想，孩子們在校努力學習，課後讀補習班，作業繁重，鮮有大量的時間休閒娛樂，玩遊戲可令學生們暫時忘記現實生活中的煩惱和壓力。
② 一些競技類的遊戲其實是鍛鍊玩家的反應能力和佈局能力的，因此，學生玩家也會培養多方面能力，例如手眼並用，危機處理，團隊協作等。
③ 有些遊戲的設計，以學習爲導向，寓教於樂，讓玩家在娛樂中學習知識，這也可以提高他們的學習效率，激發他們的學習熱情。
2 鼓勵孩子們玩遊戲的弊端
① 學生們的主要任務是學習知識，考慮到孩子們的自律性較差，允許孩子們玩優秀容易使他們分散精力，耽誤學習。
② 過度沉迷遊戲有害健康，具體而言，玩家會視力下降，養成懶惰和久坐的生活習慣，不願從事戶外運動，因而導致肥胖。然而，戶外運動是更好的方式放鬆身心，提高學習效率。
③ 少兒不宜的遊戲內容是精神鴉片。暴力，色情，血腥的信息，對於成長中的年輕人而言，毒害其心靈，誤導人生觀，誘發暴力衝動，導致校園欺凌或少年犯罪的上升，可能會危害社會。
【範文賞析】
【首段】背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場
Computer games like many other prevailing entertaining activities are look down up by many parents as time-wasters. However, it is true that video games have been exerting a peculiar fascination on a great many people young players. Perhaps that is why people differ greatly in their stands as to whether students should be allowed to play video games. As I see it, it is no need to stop students from playing games so long as we properly arrange and control their game time.
【解析】
1. Video games have been exerting a peculiar fascination on a great many people young player. 一直以來，電子遊戲都對年輕的玩家極有吸引力。
2. It is no need to stop students from playing games so long as we properly arrange and control their game time. 我認爲，只要可以合理安排和控制學生們遊戲時間，阻止他們玩遊戲也是沒有必要的。
【二段】鼓勵孩子們玩遊戲的弊端
To be sure, some problems invariably ensue if students excessively indulge in the computer games. First, violent video games are always blamed by the media as the reason why some teenage players become aggressive and even conduct some anti-social offenses. Also, the craziness about games is physically detrimental because players tend to reduce physical activities, thus, the sedentary lifestyle would increase the likelihood of obesity. Eventually, many parents are worried that the study will be delayed. The sole task of students is to update their knowledge. Youngsters will regret it for the rest of their lives if they fail to utilize their precious youth.
【解析】
1. some problems invariably ensue 一些問題隨之而來
2. conduct some anti-social offenses 做出反社會行爲
3. The study will be delayed 會耽誤學習。
【三段】鼓勵孩子們玩遊戲的利好
However，there is no reason to throw out the child along with the bath. Seen from the positive aspects, students can still become the beneficiaries of computer games provided that they can play in a proper way. Initially, some mental techniques trained by video games include: quick reaction, teamwork strategy, crisis-solving abilities, hand-eye coordination and so on. This kind of goal-driving experience will influence the players’ future life positively. Also, proper game time can, to some extent, help teenagers relieve their strain triggered by tight academic study. Imaginably, the study efficiency can be improved if one can vent his or her negative emotions. Last, some learning-oriented games can still facilitate students’ study, it is a good thing if players can acquire knowledge in a relaxing way.
【解析】
1. This kind of goal-driving experience will influence the players’ future life positively. 以目標爲驅動的經歷會在未來對玩家產生積極的影響。
2. The study efficiency can be improved if one can vent his or her negative emotions. 如果一個人可以釋放其不良情緒，學習效率也會提高。
3. Some learning-oriented games can still facilitate students’ study 一些以學習爲導向的遊戲也會輔助學業。
【尾段】
In closing，whether the impacts that computer games exert on players are positive or negative largely depends on how students treat games. There are many benefits for people to play video games, as for students, they should control the time，excessive indulgence is unwise.
【解析】
Whether the impacts that computer games exert on players are positive or negative largely depends on how students treat games. 玩遊戲的影響是積極還是消極，很大程度上取決於玩家對待它們的方式。
託福寫作語料庫：是否只有使我們在真實生活中學到東西的電影才值得看
【觀點類】
The movies are worth watching only if they can teach something in real life, to what extent do you agree or disagree? 只有使我們在真實生活中學到東西的電影才值得看，你在多大程度上同意這個觀點?(2016年5月28日)
【相關題目】
Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching，to what extent do you agree or disagree? 只有教會我們認知真實生活的電影纔是值得關注的，你在多大程度上同意這個觀點?(2013年9月1日)
【作家立場】
就觀影而言，人各有所愛，很多的電影值得欣賞，不同類型的電影對於觀衆有不同利好，因此，簡單認爲只有反映真實生活的電影才值得欣賞是很膚淺的。
【思路拓展】
除了反映真實生活的電影，還有那些電影是值得觀看的。
① 科幻電影：探究未知，滿足好奇是人之本性，這就是爲什麼很多年輕人喜歡看科幻類的電影。我個人就是科幻電影的發燒友，因爲科幻電影可以激發我的想象能力，滿足我的好奇心，加深我對於未知世界的洞察。
② 喜劇電影：現代人生存壓力大，觀影其實是很多人忘卻現實煩惱以及放鬆身心的一種方式，因此，觀看喜劇電影就是很好的緩解壓力的方式。電影中的幽默元素舒緩緊張情緒，培養人的幽默感，甚至可以令人在歡笑中思考生活，以樂觀態度面對生活。
讓步反映真實生活的電影值得觀看
① 當一部電影可以反映最真實的生活的時候，它可以引發觀影者共鳴，因此，一些人喜歡觀看現實主義的電影， 一些紀錄片就是很好的例證。以我爲例，我也很喜歡類似於《站臺》，《小武》這樣的寫實主義電影，它們描繪的場景很多再現了我成長的歲月的片段，因此，觀看這類電影也是一種溫暖的回憶，同時，它們加深了我對於現實生活的洞察。
【經典語料】
1. Such is human nature to explore the unknown 探究未知是人之本性
2. One man's meat is another man's poison 蘿蔔青菜，各有所愛。
3. People's tastes differ greatly in their choice of favorite movies 選擇自己喜歡的電影，人們的品味差異很大。
4. science fiction movie 科幻電影
5. a fancier of science fiction movie 科幻電影的發燒友
6. I take great pleasure in watching movies that depict the future world 我以觀賞描述未來世界的電影爲樂趣。
7. meet one's sense of curiosity 滿足一個人的好奇心
8. stir one's vivid imagination = stimulate one's vivid imagination 激發一個人豐富的想象力
9. foster my keen analytical mode of thinking 培養我敏銳的分析能力
10. deepen my insight into the future world 加深我對於未來世界的洞察
11. Watching comedy movies is an effective way to relax one's body and ease one's mind 觀看喜劇電影是有效的一種有效的放鬆身心的方式。
12. make one have a pleasant character 使一個人性格開朗
13. cultivate one's sense of humor 培養一個人的幽默感
【拓展】cultivate = foster = develop 培養
14. It is worthwhile to appreciate those movies that could mirror the reality of life 反映現實的生活的電影是值得欣賞的。
【解析】worthwhile adj有價值的
【拓展】is worth doing sth = be worthy of doing sth值得做……
15. Some documentary films greatly arouse my sympathy. 一些紀錄片極大地引起了我的共鳴
【解析】sympathy n 同情心，共鳴
16. make us have a deeper understanding about life 加深我們對於生活的理解。
17. films that mirror real life = movies that reflect real life 反映真實生活的電影
18. The nostalgic theme of the movie called up my warm memory of growth 電影懷舊的主題喚醒了我成長歲月的溫暖記憶。
【拓展】nostalgic = retrospective adj 懷舊的
19. After enjoying this thought-provoking movie, I benefited a great deal, it gave me a kind of invisible power and taught me to remain cheerful in time of adversity 觀賞了這部令人思考的電影，我收益良多，我獲得一種無形的力量，電影教會我在逆境中保持樂觀。
【解析】《肖申克的救贖 》的教育意義
【解析】remain cheerful in time of adversity 逆境保持樂觀
【解析】thought-provoking adj 令人思考的
20. I learn to brave life challenges optimistically 我學會了樂觀地面對生活的挑戰。
